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Ecstasy

Amber rays seeping through the grey woods
                     Blending with the glimmering mist
                       Crystal white floating wool packs conceal
                          Dazzling Diamonds time to time
                             Elegantly gowned in white silk
                               Fairies dancing beneath 
                                 Glittering golden moon
                                    High above the trees
                                      Immense ecstasy

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/26/2013 12:42:00 AM I really loved the pattern you gave this one. It really enhanced it, and the images here are really pretty. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/25/2013 11:41:00 AM - Proficient Manel .... ABC poem is not easy to write. - Well done! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 5/25/2013 12:00:00 PM Yes it is difficult but this is a challenge. Thank you Lisa. I love your puppy haiku

Timothy Hicks Date: 5/25/2013 11:00:00 AM No it's not too long! When I write ABC I typically go through the whole alphabet, A-Z, so no worries! Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 5/25/2013 12:01:00 PM Thanks Tim. Really appreciate.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/25/2013 6:20:00 AM Bravo, you have penned a lovely romantic poem. I agree with Tim it has a whimsical feel. I hope you enter it into the contest. Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 5/25/2013 10:38:00 AM Thank you. You are very generous

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/25/2013 5:02:00 AM Choreography of sentences dancing in unison! Excellent! Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 5/25/2013 10:39:00 AM Thank you my dear!

Timothy Hicks Date: 5/24/2013 11:14:00 PM It's very whimsical writing, Manel. And I enjoy the neat little shape you have created (almost like a teacup that's been slightly chipped on the right side). I think the strongest lines were the first two... enjoyed! Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 5/25/2013 10:40:00 AM Thanks Tim. I enjoy all your poems.