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Eclipse Moment--Constanza

I watch as the hawk hovers round Its shadow cast down by the sun, Battle for life has just begun. Mother hen fights back from the ground As the cloud turns dark and wind blows, bending basils arranged in rows Dusts swirl,breeze whistles;rain abound Clouds rumble;people run for shade, green pigment of leaves does not fade. As floss and leaves float all around. Lightning sparks as day turns to night, Eclipse of the sun comes to light. Sun appears back where it is found, high up in the sky at its post, giving out heat to dry the coast. I watch as the hawk hovers round Mother hen fights back from the ground Dusts swirl,breeze whistles;rain abound As floss and leaves float all around Sun appears back where it is found.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/9/2013 11:33:00 AM
Olusegun , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/5/2013 10:16:00 AM
I would have placed this at number 1 !! You took my eyes up to the sky with this lovely write!
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Date: 10/3/2013 9:46:00 PM
Excellent, Olusegun. Great write. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
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Date: 10/2/2013 9:42:00 PM
OLUSEGUN, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**
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Date: 9/26/2012 5:58:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your super win in Andrea's "Can You Constanza" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2012 10:05:00 AM
Olusegun, :-). Congratulations with your awesome winning poem in Andrea's "Can you Constanza?" contest. Love it, always~ LUV*PD
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Date: 9/24/2012 2:30:00 AM
Belated Congratulations on yet another win xx
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Date: 9/22/2012 9:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hope the chicks survive. Take care Lee
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Date: 9/22/2012 9:05:00 AM
Hope the storm saved the baby chicks. I enjoyed the picture you drew. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/22/2012 12:16:00 AM
Olusegun, Congratulations on your placement in Andrea’s “Can you Constanza? Contest.” There were so many really amazing entries we had a very difficult time deciding. We had to go by who followed the form best, and whose poem was most creative. I spent 4 and half hours going over the poems and Andrea, a lot longer. Thank you so much for your wonderful entry Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:42:00 PM
CONGRATS OLUSEGUN ON A GLORIOUS WRITE AND STELLAR WIN LUV .. A DELIGHTFUL TREASURE TO READ ..
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Date: 9/21/2012 9:13:00 PM
Olusegun,I enjoyed the mood this one invoked. A good topic for a constanza it was! Congratulations on your win in my contest. Glad to see you on my list.
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Date: 8/28/2012 7:22:00 AM
Nice write Segun! Thanks for your comments on my poem
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Date: 8/26/2012 5:02:00 PM
I like your poem, Olusegun, thank you for sharing, xox~PD
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Date: 8/26/2012 12:49:00 PM
A fantastic write with wonderful imagery, Olusegun! I love this form and have enjoyed reading your entry for the Constanza contest...love and blessings :))
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Date: 8/26/2012 12:38:00 PM
lovely write, my friend. Many congrats on your wins : )
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