Eclipse

Eclipse               


without sun
I am etiolated,
enfeebled, bereft

my backbone heavy
and limp,
muscles stale and indurate
from disuse

I try to lift my face,
feel the light, 
even the dawn or dusk,
even when fog would cloud my vision

but I cannot move, for
my neck is fixed,
vertebrae seized, locked,
eyes that can do no more
than stare ahead

at this monolith, this
menhir, present since
I can remember
that ages me, leaves me
threadbare and faded,
as a moth-eaten blanket
fails to sustain a warm embrace

so I shiver in the shadow,
ensnared in this eclipse,
this dark moon
that will not detach me
from its bleak orbit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Leffanta Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 1:44 PM
Finis, alor! Head for the sunshine! Aloha!
Finnis Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 4:47 PM
Hello! It's so nice to feel the sun on your face! Thanks for the comment and hello. :)
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