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Echoing Sea

Whispers of sweet nothings through my ears Roaring yet soothing tunes interrupted my veins Small boats abiding the collision of fears Abandoning the bundled senses of pain The briny tang became acidic to the heart With coral and ultramarine that entwined violently A hurricane of wolves galloping like surreal art I fall back, drowning into the depths of vibrancy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/28/2016 9:40:00 PM
ANNA, Congrats on your awesome win. I'm so behind here, the SEA theme is perfect. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:25:00 PM
Thank you! You are always so encouraging!! :)
Date: 1/18/2016 11:23:00 PM
Anna Li Congratulations on your Fine Sea win... Stop by my latest blog "This is HOW I FEEL" if you'd like. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 1/21/2016 4:01:00 AM
Thank you so much! I really enjoy your contests and I'll check out your blog :)
Date: 1/18/2016 11:05:00 PM
Very wonderful write Anna.. loved reading this morning.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/21/2016 4:00:00 AM
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 1/15/2016 5:21:00 AM
This is very good, Anna. I like the first line of the second verse in particular.
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Date: 1/15/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thank you! I am particularly proud with that line too.

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