Anna Li Poet Quatrain

Echoing Sea

Whispers of sweet nothings through my ears
Roaring yet soothing tunes interrupted my veins
Small boats abiding the collision of fears
Abandoning the bundled senses of pain

The briny tang became acidic to the heart
With coral and ultramarine that entwined violently
A hurricane of wolves galloping like surreal art
I fall back, drowning into the depths of vibrancy

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Poet Destroyer A January 28, 2016 at 9:40 PM ANNA, Congrats on your awesome win. I'm so behind here, the SEA theme is perfect. Love LINDA Anna Li February 28, 2016 at 8:25 PM Thank you! You are always so encouraging!! :)

Skat A January 18, 2016 at 11:23 PM Anna Li Congratulations on your Fine Sea win... Stop by my latest blog "This is HOW I FEEL" if you'd like. LOVE SKAT Anna Li January 21, 2016 at 4:01 AM Thank you so much! I really enjoy your contests and I'll check out your blog :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 18, 2016 at 11:05 PM Very wonderful write Anna.. loved reading this morning.. congrats on big win! Anna Li January 21, 2016 at 4:00 AM Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

Lin Lane January 15, 2016 at 5:21 AM This is very good, Anna. I like the first line of the second verse in particular. Anna Li January 15, 2016 at 10:30 PM Thank you! I am particularly proud with that line too.