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Echoes On the Mist

Listen intently to echoes 
   wafting off the mist of
   exalted mountains whispering, 
as designed poetry 'neath ether
   rapturously incites secrets 
      of versed journeys' resolve
 while quintessence reawakens
  'tween passages of stardust
     and eclipsed lunar moons,
knowledge of a lofty universe 
   lavishing abundant resources,
      whorling sumptuous seascapes

Copyright © Paloma P | Year Posted 2016

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Laura Breidenthal Date: 2/10/2017 5:59:00 PM The title drew me in...your words invoke the sense of mystic and wonder that I think was necessary for a poem like this. It makes me want to listen more intently to those whispering mountains. ;) Pretty one, Paloma. Always, Laura Login to Reply

Edward Mccall Date: 11/5/2016 11:59:00 AM A pleasant and sweet vacation from the day. Thank you Paloma. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/2/2016 12:17:00 AM Another beauty Paloma! I always appreciate your work ! : ) 7 Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 11/1/2016 8:43:00 PM Hey, Paloma, I hear those echoes all the time in my head. Great poem I might add. You can be my shrink anytime. Love your work, lady. Love and peace always. RW Login to Reply

White Wolf Date: 11/1/2016 5:48:00 PM Love your work! And this is clearly an example of why. You are quite a prolific writer I might add too. Can I borrow your Muse for awhile? Haha Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 6:22:00 PM Much appreciate your kind words Rick! My muse can be a witch with a b, if you catch my drift, you sure about that? :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/1/2016 3:39:00 PM such beautiful words you have melded together here, Paloma. Great title for this! Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 6:21:00 PM Many thanks Andrea! :)

Ralph Sergi Date: 10/31/2016 5:15:00 PM A musical poem written very beautifully. my compliments, Paloma Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 9:33:00 AM Many thanks Ralph.

Daniel Turner Date: 10/31/2016 10:06:00 AM I hear them, Paloma. Beautiful poem:) Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 9:36:00 AM So happy you did my friend! :)

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/31/2016 10:00:00 AM The echoes in the mist indeed reveal secrets..versed on a journey between lands..amd seas..Lovely Paloma. Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 9:35:00 AM Thanks so much Charmaine.

Joanna Daniel Date: 10/31/2016 9:51:00 AM This one is amazingly beautiful, Paloma:) loved each line:) Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 9:35:00 AM Thanks so much Jo. :)

Chris Green Date: 10/31/2016 9:44:00 AM "whorling sumptuous seascapes" Loved that line, it is the perfect finale to an amazing piece of work. When your pen whispers, I always listen, mist or not. Beautiful Paloma. Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 9:35:00 AM Thrilled to read your review Chris, much thanks.