Paloma P Poet Free verse

Echoes On the Mist

Listen intently to echoes 
   wafting off the mist of
   exalted mountains whispering, 
as designed poetry 'neath ether
   rapturously incites secrets 
      of versed journeys' resolve
 while quintessence reawakens
  'tween passages of stardust
     and eclipsed lunar moons,
knowledge of a lofty universe 
   lavishing abundant resources,
      whorling sumptuous seascapes

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Laura Breidenthal February 10, 2017 at 5:59 PM The title drew me in...your words invoke the sense of mystic and wonder that I think was necessary for a poem like this. It makes me want to listen more intently to those whispering mountains. ;) Pretty one, Paloma. Always, Laura

Edward Mccall November 5, 2016 at 11:59 AM A pleasant and sweet vacation from the day. Thank you Paloma.

Connie Marcum Wong November 2, 2016 at 12:17 AM Another beauty Paloma! I always appreciate your work ! : ) 7

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 1, 2016 at 8:43 PM Hey, Paloma, I hear those echoes all the time in my head. Great poem I might add. You can be my shrink anytime. Love your work, lady. Love and peace always. RW

White Wolf November 1, 2016 at 5:48 PM Love your work! And this is clearly an example of why. You are quite a prolific writer I might add too. Can I borrow your Muse for awhile? Haha Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 6:22 PM Much appreciate your kind words Rick! My muse can be a witch with a b, if you catch my drift, you sure about that? :)

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2016 at 3:39 PM such beautiful words you have melded together here, Paloma. Great title for this! Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 6:21 PM Many thanks Andrea! :)

Ralph Sergi October 31, 2016 at 5:15 PM A musical poem written very beautifully. my compliments, Paloma Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 9:33 AM Many thanks Ralph.

Daniel Turner October 31, 2016 at 10:06 AM I hear them, Paloma. Beautiful poem:) Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 9:36 AM So happy you did my friend! :)

Charmaine Chircop October 31, 2016 at 10:00 AM The echoes in the mist indeed reveal secrets..versed on a journey between lands..amd seas..Lovely Paloma. Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 9:35 AM Thanks so much Charmaine.

Joanna Daniel October 31, 2016 at 9:51 AM This one is amazingly beautiful, Paloma:) loved each line:) Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 9:35 AM Thanks so much Jo. :)

Chris Green October 31, 2016 at 9:44 AM "whorling sumptuous seascapes" Loved that line, it is the perfect finale to an amazing piece of work. When your pen whispers, I always listen, mist or not. Beautiful Paloma. Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 9:35 AM Thrilled to read your review Chris, much thanks.