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Mystic's Echoes of the Silent Shore Contest * 3/8/25

Echoes of the Silent Shore

"Hush your crashing," whispered the moon to the sea,
as the sound slowly faded from the mermaid's laughter.
Luna heard only echoes on the shore, a silent symphony
that had been ebbing across the sea, perhaps hereafter.

Often, when moonlight glimmered its soft celestial light,
she would allow me a brief glimpse of her golden hair.
It rivaled the glow of stars in the sky's ebon night,
but no longer is she here, swimming in shallows there.

Her dulcet voice was as lovely as any seraphic hymn
How I longed for the possibility of getting closer to her,
but I feared she'd be frightened if I went for a swim.
So, I gave up on that desire, thinking it best to demur.

The shoreline has become desolately quiet and bleak.
No longer does the mermaid ride upon a wave's curls.
No songs from the mermaid, whose vision I now seek.
No sighting of her tresses, nor her necklace of pearls.
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Jones Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:30 AM
Gorgeous poem and the picture is enchanting. Did you paint this too Lin? Amazing.
La France Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 3:19 PM
Lin, how lovely, what a beautifully penned poem, you are such a talent, a FAV for me, blessings ~
Lane Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 9:55 PM
Thank you, an awful lot, for visiting several of my poems tonight, Constance. I appreciate the Fave, too. Hugs.
Beaufort Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 5:54 PM
Lin, perhaps if she reads this, she'll make a comeback! We can always hope, and at least your words bring her back to us in as live a way as may be possible. I'm always a bit amazed by this legend since we do have some pretty neat mermaids walking among us in this soup. Smiles!
Lane Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 9:54 PM
Wouldn't that be a marvelous miracle, Duke? So... we have mermaids in the soup kitchen. Are they cooking bouillabaisse, conch stew, or perhaps a good old fashion seafood gumbo? LOL What a lovely thought, and I agree some of the women of PS are beautiful in many ways.
Gasun Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 6:06 PM
Such a beautiful and breathtaking piece my dear poet friend Lin. I loved and enjoyed reading it from start to end. Thanks a lot for sharing. All the best in the contest. Hugs
Lane Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 6:25 PM
Thanks, Len. I appreciate your kind thoughts. .
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