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Mystic's Echoes of the Silent Shore Contest * 3/8/25

"Hush your crashing," whispered the moon to the sea, as the sound slowly faded from the mermaid's laughter. Luna heard only echoes on the shore, a silent symphony that had been ebbing across the sea, perhaps hereafter. Often, when moonlight glimmered its soft celestial light, she would allow me a brief glimpse of her golden hair. It rivaled the glow of stars in the sky's ebon night, but no longer is she here, swimming in shallows there. Her dulcet voice was as lovely as any seraphic hymn How I longed for the possibility of getting closer to her, but I feared she'd be frightened if I went for a swim. So, I gave up on that desire, thinking it best to demur. The shoreline has become desolately quiet and bleak. No longer does the mermaid ride upon a wave's curls. No songs from the mermaid, whose vision I now seek. No sighting of her tresses, nor her necklace of pearls.

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Date: 3/15/2025 2:30:00 AM
Gorgeous poem and the picture is enchanting. Did you paint this too Lin? Amazing.
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Date: 3/11/2025 3:19:00 PM
Lin, how lovely, what a beautifully penned poem, you are such a talent, a FAV for me, blessings ~
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Date: 3/11/2025 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, an awful lot, for visiting several of my poems tonight, Constance. I appreciate the Fave, too. Hugs.
Date: 3/10/2025 5:54:00 PM
Lin, perhaps if she reads this, she'll make a comeback! We can always hope, and at least your words bring her back to us in as live a way as may be possible. I'm always a bit amazed by this legend since we do have some pretty neat mermaids walking among us in this soup. Smiles!
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/11/2025 9:54:00 PM
Wouldn't that be a marvelous miracle, Duke? So... we have mermaids in the soup kitchen. Are they cooking bouillabaisse, conch stew, or perhaps a good old fashion seafood gumbo? LOL What a lovely thought, and I agree some of the women of PS are beautiful in many ways.
Date: 3/8/2025 6:06:00 PM
Such a beautiful and breathtaking piece my dear poet friend Lin. I loved and enjoyed reading it from start to end. Thanks a lot for sharing. All the best in the contest. Hugs
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/8/2025 6:25:00 PM
Thanks, Len. I appreciate your kind thoughts. .

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