ECHOES OF THE LAKE

Trumpet-like lilies by the lake
preen for the flamboyant flamingo,
sifting through the murky waters,
searching for algae and shrimp
where crawdads click and clatter.

While silvery fish glide stealthily
leaving barely a ripple behind,
a chorus of frogs’ croaks
echo like the whining twang
of a plucked banjo string.

Dragonflies skim the water’s surface
as their translucent wings shimmer
like gems in the sunlight,
dart about the amaranth lilies
waltzing in the summertime breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hawley Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Very descriptive and good job. Congrats on your win in my contest.
Fowler Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Love the subtle alliteration Kahlani, and the "...crawdads click and clatter..." Congratulations! :)
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