Get Your Premium Membership

Echoes of the Heart

Echoes Of The Heart Those warm feelings that flow in my soul, Reverberate throughout my body as a whole. A small knot swells up inside my throat, As I swallow hard that I don't choke. I feel tremors from my head to my toes, Feeling them bounce all around like echoes. The excitement swells up from deep down inside. When I hear your voice I get so tongue tied. I often think of many different things, What holds us together is not just strings. In this world there's tons of things built, You have patched me together like an old quilt. When you are away I feel distant and alone, When I see you, my heart rings like a phone. This joy that I can only feel from you, Holds my soul together like the strongest glue. I miss you so much when we're so far apart. Shudders run through me with Echoes of The Heart. -For Gail's Echoes Of The Heart Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 11/28/2015 10:46:00 PM
Donald, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2015 12:02:00 AM
I love this, congrats on your win. I have one called Echoes Of A Coyotes Heart :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/5/2013 5:03:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Way to go..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 4/5/2013 10:31:00 AM
congrats on your winning place Donald xx
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2013 5:01:00 PM
Congrats on a great poem and win...Donna
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2013 4:27:00 PM
Dear Donald, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Just confirming my previous Congratulations. I hoped to be the first but I see Mohammad Yamin also saw YOUR Winning writing style Superb PEN. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2013 3:01:00 PM
Hello *<3 Congratulations with your wonderful and lovely poem. Sending small simple smiles all over the soup. Love-Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 4/3/2013 2:56:00 PM
well done Donald ...Seren
Login to Reply
Date: 4/3/2013 6:12:00 AM
Thank you all for such nice words of gratitude and congratulations for this poem. It means so much that these words are so appreciated. I am honored and humbled that this has won a place in such a wonderful contest for us all to enjoy. There were some great writings entered in this one.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/2/2013 6:17:00 PM
Congrats, Don. Well done. Nice going. Ralph
Login to Reply
Date: 4/2/2013 4:38:00 PM
Very nice Donald. The men ruled in this contest. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 4/1/2013 11:35:00 PM
like this one. You are welcome to ps~
Login to Reply
Date: 3/31/2013 5:30:00 PM
wow, this poem is so soothing and warm, even the dead would wake and have hope that there's someone waiting somewhere. You are talented indeed. Keep up the good work.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/31/2013 12:06:00 AM
Lovely piece
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2013 8:17:00 PM
An excellent couplet you've penned here my dear friend Donald! You're such a very talented poet as well! I love this so much and it's already a super winning piece for me. Thank you so much for sharing! Good luck and best wishes always! Happy Easter! love and hugs, Leonora
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2013 2:27:00 PM
I reading your poetry I look forward to more of your poetry.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2013 12:08:00 PM
Lovely. Well done :)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2013 9:51:00 AM
As Oprah would say, "That's a WOW WOW!"
Login to Reply
Sada Avatar
Asmau Sada
Date: 3/30/2013 4:28:00 PM
Lovely poem.I like your style of writing.You are highly Welcome Mr Donald William.
Date: 3/29/2013 9:34:00 AM
A very beautiful piece Donald and welcome to PS.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/29/2013 7:08:00 AM
Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Very expressive and emotive work..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 3/29/2013 2:31:00 AM
Dear Donald,Congratulations again 2 in a row. This is a great POEM to say Good night on. I look forward to reading more of YOU and can't wait for "Pid" to continue. It was a Pleasure reading YOU tonight, Sleep Well. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
Login to Reply
Date: 3/28/2013 9:04:00 PM
Donald, your poem is amazingly expressive with sweet emotions that send the echoes to ones heart.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/28/2013 1:51:00 PM
Hi Donald. I see you've made a smashing entrance to the soup ... already heading a contest. I plan to enter. WELCOME! And good luck in Echoes of the Heart! Your poem should do well.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/28/2013 1:13:00 PM
Greeting in the fold of Life Membership, Donald. I enjoyed your poem. A winner in the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/28/2013 1:03:00 PM
- A really beautiful poem, Donald - Admits that I'm a bit "weak" for such love poems :) - Good Luck in contest, hope you win!!!!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things