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The sound of the oboe is an invitation for love. – My quote. Listen, my sweet love, can you hear its sound? It makes me wish to hug tight and kiss you. It vibrates softly through the woods around. It is no wonder true love always grow. The oboe's balmy melody that haunts, Resembling a fine choir richly endowed, But what need have we of people around? Reminding us of love and all our wants? Once heard, not forgotten, though there's no crowd. Listen to our love sighs as soft as sound. A rune in honour of the rising moon. From languishing lento, or diverging Into a crescendo only to tune Mellifluous melody, varying Blue birds sing their lovely tune which resounds Around the mountains as the oboe sings Its magical melody. Our hearts feel The pain of euphoric love, which confounds Though we feel as titanic queens and kings, Only by love our life is made real. Then we rest a while under an oak tree A light breeze brought to us our oboe's song, Could we not be as merry as could be? The kiss we give was long, enticing long. We make our way to our lonely warm hut How well, through our love we do understand. The echo of the oboe makes its way, A fine fire is lit and wood crackles but The tender meat stew flavoured smell so grand, Surely fairies wish to have their last say. 3 May 20222 Placed 1 Subject Love 'Form O- Ode- New poems' Contest Sponsor Constance La France HowManySyllables and Rhymezone Used

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Date: 6/13/2022 3:00:00 PM
Romantic, beautiful... full of lovely imagery. Ann
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Date: 6/9/2022 4:30:00 AM
Victor, a beautiful love poem and congratulations on your win in my Ode contest, wonderfully penned and love the image, music and your quote also, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 6/8/2022 2:44:00 PM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. I knew it was a good one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 6/2/2022 7:29:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on this one. A job very well done.
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Date: 6/2/2022 12:37:00 PM
Victor, I offer my congratulations for your first place win with this charming ode to the oboe and its beautiful, haunting tones.
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Date: 6/2/2022 11:07:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win ,Victor, in Constance's Ode. Blessings my friend
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Date: 6/1/2022 9:45:00 PM
Back to your beautifully romantic poem with Congratulations on its first place win, Victor !
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Date: 6/1/2022 8:27:00 PM
It's long since I've commented on your poems. This is an ample opportunity, I feel. Like all other works, this is very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/1/2022 5:29:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, Victor, congratulations:) really nice to hear the oboe too...
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Date: 6/1/2022 12:31:00 PM
Your "Echoes of an Oboe" is a lovely write/picture. Enjoy your win and day with blessings...........
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 6/1/2022 12:39:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/30/2022 2:43:00 PM
Beautiful Victor, I had to "fav" this one. I haven't heard that song played by an oboe before; have a friend who is 2nd chair in the local orchestra. I think she'll love this, will have to show her. Enjoyed.
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Date: 5/9/2022 5:42:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on writing a wonderful poem. One so vivid and passionate. An oboe is such a neat-sounding instrument.
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Date: 5/8/2022 8:49:00 PM
Victor, you have merged music, romance, and nature into an enchanting vignette. The beautiful oboe tune playing as I read and re-read your enticing ode to love added so much to the overall enjoyment. Pure loveliness.
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Date: 5/4/2022 1:16:00 AM
You have created a congenial and lovely ambiance for the romantic pair to splurge in love. The Oboe's song is the trigger ! Beautiful poem and a great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Victor !
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Date: 5/3/2022 5:55:00 PM
An enchanting write Victor, best wishes in the Contest
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Date: 5/3/2022 4:41:00 PM
WoW! Victor, This is such a good entry for the contest theme. I found it to be alluring, enchanting, and romantic. It had a nice rhythm and flow as well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/3/2022 4:18:00 PM
an oboe's haunting tune, the woods and a warm fire awaiting the lovers. What more could be desired for romance. Lovely.
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Date: 5/3/2022 12:36:00 PM
Victor, your beautiful poem has it all-music and romance and a fireside and fairies, along with rich imagery. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn
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Date: 5/3/2022 8:55:00 AM
Victor, you have such a gift for writing on such interesting subjects. Beautifully written, despite the difficulties of the framework, you were able to effortlessly flow with the melody of love in your soul. Check SP.
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Date: 5/3/2022 8:55:00 AM
So romantic my friend, great for a win. Blessings dear friend
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Date: 5/3/2022 8:15:00 AM
Oozing romance! Good luck for the contest
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Date: 5/3/2022 7:04:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. You have the love and romance poems down. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara
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Date: 5/3/2022 6:38:00 AM
Lovely Victor! Debx
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Date: 5/3/2022 5:32:00 AM
Beautiful write Victor.....the difficulty of the structure you easily flowed with the melody of love. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette
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Date: 5/3/2022 5:12:00 AM
Kudos for writing such a long poem with syllable constraints--expertly done, Victor. Much rhythm to the echoes of oboe. Best for a TOP win.
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