Echoes Deeply

Sweet talking buttercups
when your petal lips moved 
I was held in a butterfly trance 
floating warm heartbeats of breath
skipping inside drum rolls
batting lids whisper silently
behind scenes on chamber walls
precious deep gem shines
Dancing vision of beauties light 
dark jewels sparkling star luster treasure 
Princess pearl of the night sky 
alone wolf cold moon in shadows of life
smiling beautiful silver lining thoughts 
dreaming of your smile
The happiness in special moments 
your eyes such mirrors dazzling me
in you I found a beautiful soul 
floating with the spirits 
singing an angel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gulley Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 12:55 PM
Alone wolf cold moon in shadows of life smiling beautiful silver lining thoughts dreaming of your smile. I love this so much. A wonderful write my pen friend.....Sharon G.
Hamilton Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:31 AM
such lovely images painted Liam old pal a delightful pen hugs 7
Mcdaid Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 1:47 PM
smiling linda always great to see you pal bless you wonderful comment dear friend
Horsman Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 6:10 AM
beautiful and ever so poetic, a joy to read and an inspiration.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 1:25 PM
thank you kindly harry for the very beautiful comment bless you dear friend
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 11:38 PM
Sweet sentiments with beautiful imagery, Liam! I love the flow of your poetry...hugs, Rhonda
Mcdaid Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 1:22 PM
thank you rhonda for the wonderful comment bless you dear friend
Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:37 AM
A work honoring one that you love or so it seems..Romantic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Mcdaid Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 1:04 PM
it sure is sara deeply honoring wonderful comment dear pal bless you
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 9:50 AM
free flow of beautiful thoughts.only pleasure.love liam..wish you and your family merry christmas XXXX rajat
Mcdaid Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 1:01 PM
rajat dear pal truly heartfelt beautiful comment may the light of his peace and warm love grace your hearts with joy on his birthday sending you an irish blessing happy christmas
Goff Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 7:40 AM
Fine tribute! Liam! Jimbo
Mcdaid Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 12:53 PM
thank you for the wonderful comment jimbo bless you pal
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 6:45 AM
Just awesome! Another very beautiful romantic and dazzling gem of a love poem Liam.! So full of love and gentleness,one to to be held close to ones heart, my dearest friend. A solid 7 +++ for you! I enjoyed it a lot! Your pen is golden as always!May you always feel the presence of Jesus and his angels protecting you giving you day and night their guidance light and strengh. Keep your faith and dreams! :) Love and hugs!xxxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 12:45 PM
thank you dorian dear friend for the very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
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