Echoes

Beautiful yet mocking
my life was echoes
of lost ambitions and joy
growth, waning and resurrection...

Then came you
echoing like a rocky wood
reverberating dreams
like the sound of thunder in blossoming orchards...

Come to me
in the silence of night
breaking the silent shadows
echo as sunlight on a stream...

I dream of you
sweetness, how sweet and bittersweet
 i should awake in paradise
next to your thirsty longing eyes...

Without your honey kisses
and ardent affections
there is no echo
only silence...

The love we share
is an angel
in any form...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 2:45 PM
I'm reading again too..so many lovely lines ..I love the thunder in blossoming orchards and echo as sunlight on a stream...
Carroll Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 2:48 PM
Hi Donna, thank you as you are most kind.. Ken
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October 21, 2013 at 10:13 AM
a delightfully beautiful piece old pal
Carroll Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 11:32 AM
Hey Liam, Thanks buddy for stopping by.. Ken
Andresen Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 3:17 PM
- Burning heart   leaves echo .... no glow no echo .... silence - this is so beautiful Ken! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carroll Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 3:19 PM
Thank you Anne for the wonderful visit today.. Ken
Manassian Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 3:03 PM
Read this fantastc piece before...coming back to post....Absolutely amazing....Your work is truly a treat to read. :-)
Carroll Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 3:05 PM
Hi Eileen, thank you for the lovely visit and comment.. Ken
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 8:23 PM
No echo..only silence....lovely....
Carroll Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 8:26 PM
Thank you Donna.. Ken
Onclaud Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 5:49 PM
you make me sigh, ken... just adorable!.. a fav!..:) huggs
Carroll Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Hi Nette, Thank you for stopping by, you are most kind. Ken
Adams Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 5:19 PM
this is a gorgeous write...love it! :)
Carroll Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 5:24 PM
Thank you Sandra.. Ken
Ruebel Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Just lovely and oh so romantic...You are a charmer for sure. As Always, Shar
Carroll Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Thank you for visiting today Sharon.. Ken
Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 10:05 AM
Romantic work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Carroll Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 11:04 AM
Thank you Sara for visiting.. Ken
Matose Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 4:31 AM
Great tribute to a lover, You always write quality stuff. Thanks Ken, for sharing. JM
Carroll Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 4:35 AM
Hi Joseph, Thank you for the warm visit. Ken
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