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Echo of your Heartbeat


the first song I ever heard was not listened to with ears the rhythmic beat of your heart was the melody I danced to… …the whoosh of life blood, my lullaby my heart learned the harmony rejoicing in our sweet duet
I still hear the echo of that maternal music
the natural tempo has been bastardized mutilated by machinery the nerve splitting beeps that slowed and then stopped /\/\/\/\/\/\/ \ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\______________________ my heart mourns and aches with the loss the dance partner and teacher I love now, stuttering and insecure, my heart wants the confidence of your harmony but you taught me to sing, and now that I teach the beat to my child,
the echo of your heart song will never die. ________/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\
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Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Emotional and gripping Crystol. The heartbeats are always with us. Congratulations! :)
Woods Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 8:46 AM
Thank you! Xo
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