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Echo and Narcissus retelling Ovid's the Greek poets account

    Oh Echo why, did she beguile.
    Queen Hera with loquacity.
    Thou mountain nymph whose winsome smile
    Did mask Zeus from complicity
    With sylvan nymphs, his sole desire.
    Those dalliances once revealed
    Set jealous Hera's heart on fire.
    Echo was blamed, her fate now sealed
    To never speak, till others spoke.
    And only then, those last words said.
    Then bite her tongue, or she would choke.
    This punishments inside her head.
    A woodland hiding place she found
    In solitude and loneliness.
    One day she heard a youthful sound.
    His voice her lips, it did caress.
    Then " do not hide " Echo replied.
    This paragon of many charms,
    Bemused he said " please do no hide " 
    When Echo ran towards his arms,
    Narcissus cast her to the ground,
    Extolling death, to her embrace
    As from her lips, his words resound.
    She disappeared without a trace.
    To wander evermore alone.
    Those mountain caves were her domain.
    Soon blessed death, turned bones to stone.
    Her voice was all that did remain.

    8 / 16 / 2025




    
    

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