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"...you have one duck... I saw it." "no crickets, but yes, the sound" ~I have some fish, swimming around... Who are you? And where do you be? As I walk this forest, how do you, see me? A cricket's sound, some fish around, But you and you lost to my sea. Why, do you two follow me? An open door, extended before, A hand, a smile, I waited awhile, with hopes and maybe some fantasy. I hoped you woulda, woulda hit on me. But in retro, I did so see... My time of past, dyes deep and fast, a flow, a hum, my life was numb. In a time of change, I rearranged, the elements of my being. I changed, to my Me Becoming. And I stopped in my tracks, while in my running. Hanging there was Venus dear, A photo I gave you, from above. The Sun ablaze, the Moon amazed, while I heard your Heart. My love... But questioned I when you raised an I, and you didn't reply to my song? I sang again! And I glared at you then, but you turned, as though I were wrong? A butterfly, a kiss by your eye... and yet, I still wonder why your park is gone. And the Indian Sang, but you heard no song? ~Know. The journey is Long...

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