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Eaten By the World

Eaten By The World I tried to eat the world but it caused me stomach pains The bones of the lost are all that remains It was flavored with deceit with a coating of sweet honey The rotisserie went round and round it was powered by big money I drank from the rivers as they began to flood Fish no longer lived there the waters turned to blood The grain from the fields had long ago blown away The once fertile soil had turned to dust and clay Fruit from all the trees lay rotting on the ground Fists upon my chest I began to pound We once had a garden a paradise on earth With greed we all destroyed it we didn’t understand it's worth So I took another bite trying to get my share empty tasteless promises with no nourishment there I watched the World bite back Earthquakes our demise Hurricanes and fires As ocean waters rise People seemed surprised The changes came so fast Sooner rather than later We became part of the past A planet without humans Skies now crystal blue The world she survived By eating me and you

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Date: 3/20/2020 2:26:00 PM
A great read and very poignant Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Simon. I appreciate the visits.
Date: 1/19/2020 5:34:00 PM
very compelling. will continue to follow you . I love the way you see the world
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2020 5:38:00 PM
Aww , thanks Nora. I hope you are enjoying your time here at the soup.
Date: 12/15/2019 3:56:00 PM
I try to keep up on all your poems, but here is one it looks like I missed! wow, sometimes you will see poems that get POTD and you wonder why, but THIS one I can understand how you got recognition for it. outstanding work, Richard.
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Date: 12/9/2019 10:36:00 AM
The Apocalypse of Richard, Chapter 4: "You're dead, jerks". Congrats on POTD, seer)
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Date: 12/5/2019 12:27:00 PM
Belated congratulations, Richard, on POTD. We need more poems like these! So little time left to change our ways.
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Date: 12/3/2019 5:32:00 PM
Wowser Rick! How did I miss this one! Congrats on a well deserved POTD It's a beauty of a write, the world is in quite a state, obvious the 4 horsemen are galloping to it's conclusion, only the faithful will survive. Greedy, corrupt, immoral humans, nations and corporations will not. I've read the book and so have you, we know how it ends!
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Date: 12/1/2019 12:25:00 PM
This is awesome, Richard. A Fav for me. Belated congrats on your November 20, 2019, Poem of the Day. ~Mark
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Date: 11/30/2019 9:50:00 AM
Unfortunately homo sapiens did not do justice to the world he is born in to. The unfortunate thing is that he is destroying it physically and morally. You have echoed that so well. Every human on earth has to be made aware of that. Great poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2019 8:25:00 PM
Being aware and doing something are very different things. I think we have s doing problem.
Date: 11/27/2019 12:36:00 PM
Are we doomed to repeat what we've done? a powerful piece of poetry.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/27/2019 3:08:00 PM
My guess is probably.
Date: 11/25/2019 6:10:00 AM
Back with Congratulations Richard on your POTD - not one country can I name that will not give you a stomach ache if you took a slice to eat, guess we are doomed to "become part of the past" Hugs Jenn.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2019 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer, hugs Rick.
Date: 11/24/2019 9:12:00 AM
Extremely powerful... and true... Ann
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Date: 11/24/2019 3:24:00 AM
See I'm late with congrats on potd but still here to give it on a well deserved potd too!;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2019 8:11:00 AM
You are sweet, thanks Brenda.
Date: 11/23/2019 6:16:00 PM
Hello Richard … like anything that has become extinct, humanity is not above that. Our greed will lead us to our demise - thank you Richard for your fine verse - Lindsay
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2019 8:12:00 AM
I agree, we should be concerned.
Date: 11/22/2019 7:51:00 PM
You are truly the master, Richard, this poem, 'A Mission Statement' of the theatre called earth. Yes mankind, heading into oblivion, self-destruct. Like to take this opportunity for the two contest, where on both, your starter (line) so inspired me,,to thank you sincerely!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2019 9:02:00 AM
Much appreciated, I’m glad to offer you some inspiration Harry.
Date: 11/22/2019 7:01:00 PM
This poem really hits home Richard, in the fact that we must all do our part to see this does not happen. I feel sad there is so much truth in your words. Congratulations on your deserving honor of having it chosen as POTD! xxoo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2019 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Connie. I fear we can’t agree on the small things so I am fearful the big ones will swallow us up.
Date: 11/22/2019 11:55:00 AM
Richard, your poem tells a sad story and a true story, as a nature lover it makes me want to weep because it is the reality of your fading world 1
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2019 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Constance. ;0)
Date: 11/22/2019 8:53:00 AM
Wow! Richard, I don't know how I missed this deep and thought provoking write. The message within this well written is powerful and revealant. It's likened to a wake up all that needs to be seen. This poem deserves poem of the year! Congratulations on getting the poem of day. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2019 9:27:00 AM
You are kind Alexis. Hugs Rick.
Date: 11/21/2019 11:36:00 AM
Just returning to say congrats on potd..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2019 9:27:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 11/21/2019 11:00:00 AM
Congrats for POTD this is very good to detail and very correct
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2019 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Gregory. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/21/2019 9:00:00 AM
This is the treatment of our mother, and when she returns with discipline. Smooth flow to wake us up! Blessings
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/21/2019 9:15:00 AM
Eventually she will rip us from her tit so that her other children will not be forced to be without her nourishment.
Date: 11/21/2019 8:41:00 AM
Hi Rick: Your poem echoes things t come if we don't become aware soon. Great poem,
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/21/2019 8:56:00 AM
I hope not. Thanks Ralph.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/21/2019 8:42:00 AM
THINGS TO COME*
Date: 11/21/2019 8:23:00 AM
A very powerful write. It enlightens the reader of their personal responsibility to Mother Earth. Awakened and aware.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/21/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Darlene. ;0)
Date: 11/20/2019 8:52:00 PM
Back with Congrats on POTD. Way to go!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/20/2019 11:39:00 PM
Thanks Charles.
Date: 11/20/2019 8:45:00 PM
Thank goodness I'm not a dinosaur. I have a living soul, and it shall never die. As far as the World. There's nothing new under the Sun. Ecc. 1:9. It's all been done before. Congratulations Richard, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/20/2019 11:42:00 PM
Thanks Brandy. ;0)
Date: 11/20/2019 4:16:00 PM
Richard congratulations on your POTD!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/20/2019 11:44:00 PM
Thanks Constance, HugsRick.
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