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Easily Broken

The water’s calm lay broken by a breeze; a whisper, yet it shivered ‘cross the lake, dispiriting reflected hues with ease, perhaps without intent, within its wake. In silence, at the water’s edge, she stood and watched as scenes of beauty disappeared; dark echoes of a sunset, red as blood; distorted visions drowned then re-appeared. Delivered with a faint yet crippling blow, such consequences borne of careless breath. Dark seas of salty heartache vowed to grow, engraved with scars, adornments until death. As words with thought once bathed a tender heart, just one without did tear her world apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/11/2010 12:21:00 PM
Sad and heartfelt piece >> James
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:08:00 PM
A Tender Heart! Very touching sonnet, Sharon. Love, Lainie
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:29:00 AM
I see the weekend brought a lot of inspiration to all PoetrySoup Poets. I enjoyed reading you poetry today Sharon. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 10:28:00 PM
Sad but brilliant Love Roger x
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:11:00 PM
it's very deep this one. Is she contemplating suicide, Sharon? Very very beautifully written. Once again, it reminded me of one I wrote, but it was on suicide and I am not sure this one is or not. Also I was thinking it was mourning for someone lost at sea perhaps! I keep wondering if I knew you on another site or from a magazine before. Your name seems so familiar! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:26:00 PM
And your talent shines yet again with this amazing sonnet, Sharon :)--wow--I was just really drawn to this one--each stanza evokes so much sadness--had to read it twice to take it all in--bravo again to you--:) keep writing!! --nikko :)
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