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Earth Was My First Breath of Air

Earth was my first breath of air My spirit crashed, I landed there I gasped and took my first deep breath Bursting from the watery depths Lumbering up in flames I raged And sucked the oxygen from air Then plunged into a lake of fire To quench the thirst of my desire – Oh, battered spirit, bruised and burned! You never knew, you never learned! Earth was your first breath of air Your spirit lives, is living there –

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Date: 10/27/2023 8:55:00 AM
This is so well written John. A great poem. Love the title. Great imagery, ‘Bursting from the watery depths’ ‘ Then plunged into a lake of fire’. Love the last line. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing :)
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John Oldham
Date: 10/28/2023 5:26:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughts, Christina. Glad you liked it! Best, John
Date: 9/23/2023 8:50:00 PM
I can picture this in my head and with that being said congratulations on your win.
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John Oldham
Date: 9/25/2023 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, Miranda! :)
Date: 9/20/2023 2:40:00 PM
Love it!!!
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John Oldham
Date: 9/21/2023 5:08:00 AM
:)
Date: 9/17/2023 12:14:00 AM
Your storytelling in this poem is great, keep it up!
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John Oldham
Date: 9/17/2023 3:30:00 PM
Thank you, Some One! Best, John
Date: 9/16/2023 8:02:00 PM
Hey John! EARTH WAS MY FIRST BREATH OF AIR is a Brilliant piece of work. Great job! Peace! VB Rogers black panther
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John Oldham
Date: 9/17/2023 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, Val! Warm Regards, John

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