Earth Sky and Water

The earth and the sky come together with water All in harmony

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Terry O'Leary

Date: 7/12/2012 3:38:00 PM

Very good 'structure'... Very nice... I like your Haikus, and envy your ability to 'generate' such 'artistic' ones... Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2012 1:47:00 PM

Yes, all in harmony Robert - well said. - oxox Anne-Lise

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 7/12/2012 12:28:00 AM

great logical thought .thank you for sharing .jk

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/11/2012 9:49:00 PM

This is a great Haiku! I really enjoyed the wisdom of it! And yes, I did see the highlights of that game in Texas...all those players RUNNING into their dugouts after a large crack of thunder! Fear was in their eyes, big time! Awesome Work Robert!!