Paghunda Zahid Poet Free verse

Earth is jinxed opposing

Butterflies renouncing their dreams...
Birds with trimmed wings... 

Blood ocean... barren trees... burnt houses...
Teared eyes... and shattered bodies….

Earth is ugly.... Earth is savage...
Earth is but a jinxed place....!!


           Butterflies have reclaimed their thrones 
           And the birds sore high and high up in the skies

           The oceans are clean, trees being green
           The kids are smiling, their bodies thriving 

           The galactic relams dance in joy and peace
           As the earth evolves to a mother's lap 



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Duke Beaufort January 17, 2024 at 2:30 PM I often try to decide which half I prefer to read. In this case it's a very tough choice since I believe the environment is stressed. We've actually been very lucky to this point. The truth doesn't have to be black and white. It's only mostly bad (lol) if you look at the facts. Paghunda Zahid February 27, 2024 at 10:03 AM Haha that's true. And very unfortunate. Thank you

Jennifer Proxenos January 8, 2024 at 1:11 PM Hi Paghunda, how are you dear friend. this is such a refreshing write, 'The oceans are clean trees being green, The kids are smiling, their bodies thriving' . I love this write, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Paghunda Zahid January 15, 2024 at 10:24 AM Hi Jennifer, I am great Alhamdulillah. How about you ? Thank you for your visit Jenn. I really appreciate it

Valsa George December 26, 2023 at 9:40 PM You have made a great choice and have brought a diametrically opposite scene of a clean and beautiful earth where everyone is happy and all are fine and joyous. Well done Paghunda.all the Best. Paghunda Zahid January 15, 2024 at 10:23 AM Thanks Valsa

Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2023 at 9:29 AM Now THAT'S the way to do it Paghunda Zahid January 15, 2024 at 10:22 AM Thanks Andrea

Silent One December 22, 2023 at 12:01 PM You opposed this poem very well creating words that that are poetic with a poem that means very different things.. Paghunda Zahid January 15, 2024 at 10:22 AM Thank you for kind remarks SO