Beautiful Scars Poet Free verse

Earth Can'T Contain Our Love

a deep aria of cobalt hue
encompasses us in the sky-
our fate started so long ago;
a place where forever lasts forever,
where stardust spreads over
my barren shoulders and he
kisses me like youth

below the grey glaze
shadow of the moon,
he lifts me –
HIGHER-
and
HIGHER
for the constellations
cry when we are near

my nudity, 
worn like silk,
his touch, 
soft as chiffon

earth can't contain our love-
black holes fear us, 
they tremble
when we
KISS
lightning strikes 
my tears, he wipes-
for the sky is none but ours

if you craved the morn,
i’d swipe the sun-
if you long for space 
i’d give you the entire universe

for you are mine and we are one 
MY LOVE- 
when you touch me there...
i come undone



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1.10.20
Sponsor - Brenda Chiri

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2020 at 8:40 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful and top win poem, Lu Loo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Beautiful Scars February 6, 2020 at 7:46 AM thank you sweet Smile! x:-)

Brenda Chiri January 28, 2020 at 12:07 AM Ahhh see Laura I should have known this was yours! I'm so glad you entered my contest! I love how lightening strikes when we kiss! Every poem has opened my eyes with the many beautiful ways to describe love and yours blew me away! Congratulations on your top win my dear friend!;) Beautiful Scars January 28, 2020 at 7:21 AM thank you so much sweet Brenda! I am honored you liked my poem. Hugs and blessings! x:-)

John Hamilton January 13, 2020 at 9:42 AM Congrats on another top win with this beauty Laura! Beautiful Scars January 28, 2020 at 7:20 AM thank you dear friend, be blessed x:-)

Sam Kauffman January 12, 2020 at 6:08 PM Hi LuLoo, Contratulations on your win with this lovely piece with its beautiful imagery. Beautiful Scars January 28, 2020 at 7:20 AM thank you dear Sam x:-)

Brenda Chiri January 12, 2020 at 1:06 PM Wow amazing Laura I love this! Congratulations on your top win!;)

Mike Bayles January 10, 2020 at 3:03 PM Very nice, very emotional Beautiful Scars January 10, 2020 at 5:06 PM many thanks dear Mike x:-)-luloo

John Hamilton January 10, 2020 at 11:50 AM This is stunning writing Laura, you never cease to amaze me, each write is better and better...now what? I guess I have to fave everything you write! Beautiful Scars January 10, 2020 at 5:06 PM that is so sweet dear John :) I've been working on expanding my vocabulary and doing extra writing on the side. It all helps! thank you dear man x:-)-luloo