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Earth Can'T Contain Our Love

a deep aria of cobalt hue encompasses us in the sky- our fate started so long ago; a place where forever lasts forever, where stardust spreads over my barren shoulders and he kisses me like youth below the grey glaze shadow of the moon, he lifts me – HIGHER- and HIGHER for the constellations cry when we are near my nudity, worn like silk, his touch, soft as chiffon earth can't contain our love- black holes fear us, they tremble when we KISS lightning strikes my tears, he wipes- for the sky is none but ours if you craved the morn, i’d swipe the sun- if you long for space i’d give you the entire universe for you are mine and we are one MY LOVE- when you touch me there... i come undone
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1.10.20 Sponsor - Brenda Chiri

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/28/2020 8:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful and top win poem, Lu Loo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/6/2020 7:46:00 AM
thank you sweet Smile! x:-)
Date: 1/28/2020 12:07:00 AM
Ahhh see Laura I should have known this was yours! I'm so glad you entered my contest! I love how lightening strikes when we kiss! Every poem has opened my eyes with the many beautiful ways to describe love and yours blew me away! Congratulations on your top win my dear friend!;)
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/28/2020 7:21:00 AM
thank you so much sweet Brenda! I am honored you liked my poem. Hugs and blessings! x:-)
Date: 1/13/2020 9:42:00 AM
Congrats on another top win with this beauty Laura!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/28/2020 7:20:00 AM
thank you dear friend, be blessed x:-)
Date: 1/12/2020 6:08:00 PM
Hi LuLoo, Contratulations on your win with this lovely piece with its beautiful imagery.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/28/2020 7:20:00 AM
thank you dear Sam x:-)
Date: 1/12/2020 1:06:00 PM
Wow amazing Laura I love this! Congratulations on your top win!;)
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Date: 1/10/2020 3:03:00 PM
Very nice, very emotional
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/10/2020 5:06:00 PM
many thanks dear Mike x:-)-luloo
Date: 1/10/2020 11:50:00 AM
This is stunning writing Laura, you never cease to amaze me, each write is better and better...now what? I guess I have to fave everything you write!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/10/2020 5:06:00 PM
that is so sweet dear John :) I've been working on expanding my vocabulary and doing extra writing on the side. It all helps! thank you dear man x:-)-luloo

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