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"When your child becomes your world, that is true love. A love only a mother can understand."
I had a dream
Such a beautiful dream
Where love moved, and grew inside of me
From a seed to a tree
Every leaf and every bloom
Split from my body filling the room
And in this dream there echoed in the halls
A childish ruckus and tiny falls
How it swelled into a love so grand
It swallowed the city and flooded the land
In my dream I had given birth
When she opened her eyes, I named her Earth

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Date: 12/23/2023 3:12:00 AM
Enjoyed this very much. Thanks
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Date: 12/19/2023 4:25:00 AM
Andreanna, Your poem weaves an image of boundless love, blossoming from within to encompass the very world. Your words burst with vivid imagery, transforming a tender dream into a powerful anthem of connection and belonging. It leaves one feeling profoundly embraced, yearning for the dream to spill beyond the boundaries of sleep and into the waking world. Beautiful! - Blessings, Daniel
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 12/20/2023 12:48:00 AM
Thank you. Very kind words. I’m So happy I could touch you with my writing. Thank you for reading!
Date: 5/20/2020 8:29:00 AM
I love this poem. It has a lovely flow and beautifully written.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:45:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/19/2020 7:37:00 PM
I have read a couple of your poems just now and could feel to the heart. Well written!
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:47:00 AM
Thank you, I am glad my words could resonate with you.
Date: 5/19/2020 4:27:00 PM
OOH I love this poem. It has such a good flow and rhythm to it.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:48:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/18/2020 10:28:00 AM
Andreanna, an ethereal piece filled with wonderful metaphor and imagery and of course emotion. At risk of repeating myself, I do enjoy your writing.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:48:00 AM
I am humbled by your kind review. I truly appreciate the love.
Date: 5/18/2020 8:19:00 AM
Lovely piece Andreanna, nice rhyme and flow too. Well done!
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:50:00 AM
Thank you. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/18/2020 5:15:00 AM
Lovely and creative, Andreanna! This is the first poem of yours I'm reading...and I'm impressed! ~ Regards // paul
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:53:00 AM
Thank you, Paul. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 5/17/2020 10:51:00 PM
This is exotic, beautiful couplet there and who would have thought Earth was gonna be birthed ? The imagery is so powerfully hard to conjure. I wanna be like you when I grow up, able to write with such fluidity, poise and eloquence.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:56:00 AM
Thank you, I am flattered. I appreciate your kind words. I love creating imagery through my words. That is my favorite part of writing.
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