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^{_{"When your child becomes your world, that is true love. A love only a mother can understand."}}

I had a dream Such a beautiful dream Where love moved, and grew inside of me From a seed to a tree Every leaf and every bloom Split from my body filling the room And in this dream there echoed in the halls A childish ruckus and tiny falls How it swelled into a love so grand It swallowed the city and flooded the land In my dream I had given birth When she opened her eyes, I named her Earth

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Jake Werner

Date: 12/23/2023 3:12:00 AM

Enjoyed this very much. Thanks

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 12/19/2023 4:25:00 AM

Andreanna, Your poem weaves an image of boundless love, blossoming from within to encompass the very world. Your words burst with vivid imagery, transforming a tender dream into a powerful anthem of connection and belonging. It leaves one feeling profoundly embraced, yearning for the dream to spill beyond the boundaries of sleep and into the waking world. Beautiful! - Blessings, Daniel

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 12/20/2023 12:48:00 AM

Thank you. Very kind words. I’m So happy I could touch you with my writing. Thank you for reading!

Franci Hoffman

Date: 5/20/2020 8:29:00 AM

I love this poem. It has a lovely flow and beautifully written.

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:45:00 AM

Thank you.

Ojasvita Anand

Date: 5/19/2020 7:37:00 PM

I have read a couple of your poems just now and could feel to the heart. Well written!

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:47:00 AM

Thank you, I am glad my words could resonate with you.

Sita Gaia

Date: 5/19/2020 4:27:00 PM

OOH I love this poem. It has such a good flow and rhythm to it.

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:48:00 AM

Thank you.

James Inman

Date: 5/18/2020 10:28:00 AM

Andreanna, an ethereal piece filled with wonderful metaphor and imagery and of course emotion. At risk of repeating myself, I do enjoy your writing.

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:48:00 AM

I am humbled by your kind review. I truly appreciate the love.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/18/2020 8:19:00 AM

Lovely piece Andreanna, nice rhyme and flow too. Well done!

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:50:00 AM

Thank you. Much appreciated.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/18/2020 5:15:00 AM

Lovely and creative, Andreanna! This is the first poem of yours I'm reading...and I'm impressed! ~ Regards // paul

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. I appreciate your kind words.

Umar Nasir

Date: 5/17/2020 10:51:00 PM

This is exotic, beautiful couplet there and who would have thought Earth was gonna be birthed ? The imagery is so powerfully hard to conjure. I wanna be like you when I grow up, able to write with such fluidity, poise and eloquence.

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 9:56:00 AM

Thank you, I am flattered. I appreciate your kind words. I love creating imagery through my words. That is my favorite part of writing.