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Earnestly, Ernest

Papa ...

Why build your walls so thick?
          Did you fear the world would tumble in on you -
               Find you as vulnerable and discomposed as the rest of us?
     I think your TRUE battles - your wars - took place within

An Id so ambiguous and at odds with itself
          That you drowned it in substance and sin and mortality
               The edge of a knife too jagged for shrewd application
     Visceral impulse, your fine compass

Those paths and bearings felt the prow of your words
          Perchance the movable feast was NOT Paris
               But rather the light in you - Paris as you lived it, in the rain
     You and she, shining, in tremulous unison

Tapping keys with the lethality of your favorite rifle
          The point of your pen invasive as any needle, poisoned
               Ravaged and gored by the demons of night
     Yet passed untouched by the bulls of Pamplona

Your world was raw on the half-shell
          You, with Tabasco and a paring knife
               Beauty found in muddy fields and mustard gas
     As deep and compelling as a Caribbean sunrise

More taken by the grainy texture of a pear on your palate
          Than by all the gods of humankind
               And THAT, that easy allure -
     That sublime simplicity ...

Is why ... I love you.





Written and submitted on November 24, 2019
For the "Your Favorite Artist" Poetry Contest
Chantelle Anne Cooke, Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 6:48 PM
Congratulations on your win , he sounds like a very interesting person
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 11:40 AM
- ( A strong personality this man :) - Greg, congratulations on your top winning poem ... well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 12:44 AM
You bring out the uniqueness of this man as if you had studied his life Greg. This is just superb! Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! xxoo Happy Thanksgiving!
Na Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 9:45 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Greg
Chiri Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 9:07 PM
Gregory great win congratulations!;)
Babbit Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 9:59 AM
This is unique, what a portrait you paint.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 1:01 AM
Love this. A true gem and another extraordinary write from your pen... God bless you dear friend, Love, Gina
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