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Early Winter Sun

Early winter sun; low in the sky Warm light burnishing the yellow leaves that stubbornly cling to the birches Silver trunks contrast with their own dark shadows Russet browns of the larches beyond add a touch of fire And the lattice of twigs and branches from the oaks and ashes In harmonious concert, complete the sylvan scene Texture is added by the gritstone crags here and there And by the heather and grasses of the moorland foreground A babbling brook tumbles over rocks and falls Separating the open bleakness of the moor From the closed impenetrability of the woodland beyond The trees cloak the hillside, giving rise To an amazing palette of colour As layer upon layer of species and pattern Weave an intricate canvas painted in unbelievable hues Of ochre, burnt sienna, and umber An ancient stone path Worn deep by two centuries of feet and their untold histories Winds its way down to the packhorse bridge And into the woods, airy now in winter, but dense in summer A dipper walks impossibly under the water before hopping out onto a rock The pungent smell of mushrooms, making me hungry Affords the excuse to dally a little longer I rest against a dry stone wall with my lunch and flask And bask in the human solitude As I commune with the abundance of life that surrounds me Shortly I will have to leave this place For I have a few miles yet to go The days are short now and the light will fade fast But, although I will have to leave this place This place will never leave me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/1/2009 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 7/29/2009 4:19:00 PM
Amen, Nigel. It is always such a spiritual experience when we can get away from all the concrete ... smile ... wonderful imagery ... great writing here and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/28/2009 3:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured>>James
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Date: 7/27/2009 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nigel. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2009 8:15:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 7/27/2009 12:38:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Nigel.RgdsBrian
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Date: 7/26/2009 6:06:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/22/2009 8:06:00 AM
Nigel - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Debbie’s contest – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/11/2009 4:44:00 AM
This is so beautiful Nigel!! Such beauty can't ever leave us. So well described in words. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Chitra
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Date: 1/9/2009 5:40:00 PM
Nigel, good for you! I thought this would be awesome for the contest. Congratulations on this incredible poem winning in the Beauty Way contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/9/2009 7:05:00 AM
Excellent poetry, Nigel. I missed this earlier, so glad it was among the winning poems, to give me this chance to see it now! Congratulations!!~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/8/2009 11:48:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Nigel.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/27/2008 2:19:00 PM
This poem is magnificent. I feel like I am there, hearing the babbling of the brook and smelling the mushrooms, as the winter sun slowly sets. The last line is breathtaking. You probably have many more to consider but this would be a wonderful entry for The Beauty Way contest. Beautiful poetry. Love, Shar
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