Early Winter Sun

Early winter sun; low in the sky

Warm light burnishing the yellow leaves that stubbornly cling to the birches
Silver trunks contrast with their own dark shadows
Russet browns of the larches beyond add a touch of fire
And the lattice of twigs and branches from the oaks and ashes
In harmonious concert, complete the sylvan scene

Texture is added by the gritstone crags here and there
And by the heather and grasses of the moorland foreground
A babbling brook tumbles over rocks and falls
Separating the open bleakness of the moor
From the closed impenetrability of the woodland beyond

The trees cloak the hillside, giving rise
To an amazing palette of colour
As layer upon layer of species and pattern
Weave an intricate canvas painted in unbelievable hues
Of ochre, burnt sienna, and umber

An ancient stone path
Worn deep by two centuries of feet and their untold histories
Winds its way down to the packhorse bridge
And into the woods, airy now in winter, but dense in summer
A dipper walks impossibly under the water before hopping out onto a rock

The pungent smell of mushrooms, making me hungry
Affords the excuse to dally a little longer
I rest against a dry stone wall with my lunch and flask
And bask in the human solitude
As I commune with the abundance of life that surrounds me

Shortly I will have to leave this place
For I have a few miles yet to go
The days are short now and the light will fade fast
But, although I will have to leave this place
This place will never leave me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Tugaff Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. God bless. Ernilando
Mason Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 4:19 PM
Amen, Nigel. It is always such a spiritual experience when we can get away from all the concrete ... smile ... wonderful imagery ... great writing here and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
Fraser Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 3:06 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured>>James
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nigel. Love, Carol
Christian Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 8:15 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
Strand Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 12:38 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Nigel.RgdsBrian
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July 26, 2009 at 6:06 PM
Wonderful use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 8:06 AM
Nigel - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Debbie’s contest – God Bless, MJ
Lakhera Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 4:44 AM
This is so beautiful Nigel!! Such beauty can't ever leave us. So well described in words. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Chitra
Winter Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 5:40 PM
Nigel, good for you! I thought this would be awesome for the contest. Congratulations on this incredible poem winning in the Beauty Way contest! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Excellent poetry, Nigel. I missed this earlier, so glad it was among the winning poems, to give me this chance to see it now! Congratulations!!~ Love, Carrie
Strand Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 11:48 PM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Nigel.Rgds Brian
Winter Avatar
December 27, 2008 at 2:19 PM
This poem is magnificent. I feel like I am there, hearing the babbling of the brook and smelling the mushrooms, as the winter sun slowly sets. The last line is breathtaking. You probably have many more to consider but this would be a wonderful entry for The Beauty Way contest. Beautiful poetry. Love, Shar
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