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Early Winter Hiku

in the silent woods the brook is not yet frozen . . . deer prints mark fresh snow

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/24/2023 2:34:00 AM

Hello Andrea. Good Morning. You grace us with a beautiful image to vision. Your form is true including the voice and tone. Yes, you did not stray from your title. We will be approaching this moment very soon. Where I sit the temperature is in the 40s with some areas in the 30s and there have been times we've had snow in October. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a beautiful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/23/2023 11:13:00 AM

Perfectly written haiku, Andrea! I can feel the winters chill approaching and the deer searching for water from a stream not yet in winter's grip!! Thank you for this moment of beauty! Blessings to you!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/23/2023 10:03:00 AM

Very lovely, Andrea!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/23/2023 8:49:00 AM

your Haiku so accurately depicted the coming onset of winter. It was subtle, almost silent. I loved it. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/23/2023 7:57:00 AM

Amazing. Just love this one. God bless you, love, Gina

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/23/2023 7:45:00 AM

Andrea, wonderful imagery!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/23/2023 6:08:00 AM

Hi Andy I love your poem its right on the point lovely images of winter hugs Shadow

John Lawless

Date: 10/23/2023 5:39:00 AM

And the beauty of that silence reverberates in this glimpse into the woods....Nice job Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2023 4:03:00 AM

A pretty picture in so few words:-) hugs Jan x

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/23/2023 2:38:00 AM

Your imagery is great. I suffer because here in Malta the country is so drab. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2023 2:05:00 AM

- A nice picture in the forest (but, I hope it will be a while before the snow comes ... we already have frost at night ) - hugs

Robert Warlov

Date: 10/22/2023 11:45:00 PM

Which means the deer are yet to be frozen too. I saw I was first so i couldn't help myself. The quiet serenity; the sanctuary of silence is what I miss most here in the tropics.