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Early Spring

Assorted spring flowers, naked, rise in morning sun 
Breaking through a thin blanket of snow, earth spun. 
Cascades of dainty narcissus smile with golden faces 
Drinking up the sun as morning warmth embraces.

3-6-20

Stanza taken from my poem Wealth of Spring

Contest Rithimus Divisa 2 Sponsor: Gregory Barden

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Vladislav Raven Date: 3/22/2020 8:06:00 AM Hi Connie, Spring, the world is coming to life once more, after its winter sleep. I love the content of this wonderful write. It brings to life, wonderful images of light as I read each line. You have captured Spring in this wonderful write. You know how to give your subject life, Connie. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 3/19/2020 6:04:00 PM Happy Spring, dear Connie! I see this has "sprung" from an abecedarian poem. It stands alone as a beautiful single rose. "Drinking up the sun as morning warmth embraces" Hugs/John Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/12/2020 7:25:00 PM Spring, by the way, feels like it has arrived to Utah. What about Hawaii? People are going mad buying up TP and water here. Give me a break! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/12/2020 7:24:00 PM this is a little gem taken from a poem called Wealth of spring!! I agree with you, Connie. I really wish his contest were standard. There are too many good entries. I could never deal with the stress of judging it. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/10/2020 11:29:00 AM Such a perfect rhyming poem and really elegant. Astute imagery. Well penned my friend. Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 3/8/2020 7:45:00 PM beautiful imagery Connie....great choice... best wishes! hugs Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 3/8/2020 5:00:00 PM You always know how to create imagery, even when you only have 4 lines.. this one looks like a winner to me.. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 3/8/2020 9:39:00 AM Connie, and a lovely stanza it is too. Spring is not really here yet in Ottawa Canada, we get one Spring day and then a snowstorm day, this is not progress, but I have started seedlings inside and I noticed today two have sprouted_Constance Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/8/2020 3:41:00 PM I want to plant some spring flowers too this year. Thank you. xxoo

Juliet Ligon Date: 3/7/2020 5:53:00 PM Great imagery. The poem this was taken from is a beauty. Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/7/2020 9:02:00 PM Thank you Juliet, seeing it received an N/A, that means a lot to me. I know that is how it goes in contests, poems are chosen according to personal taste. xxoo

Eileen Manassian Date: 3/7/2020 3:51:00 PM How refreshing. Awwww... the beauty of spring captured in your lines, Connie. Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/7/2020 9:06:00 PM Thank you very much Eileen. I hope you are well and not in danger of contracting the Corona virus. The islands only have one case so far which is kind of miraculous. I am celebrating my two month early preemie g.daughter weighing three pounds as of yesterday! She is two weeks old today. xxoo

Eve Roper Date: 3/7/2020 3:19:00 PM Beautiful insert, Connie, good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/8/2020 3:40:00 PM Thank you Eve. You have a great week. xxoo

Rico Leffanta Date: 3/7/2020 1:20:00 PM No tulips nor daffodils in Hawai'i, but Spring is always welcome! Best wishes for the contest and your 3lbs wonder! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/7/2020 1:48:00 PM Thank you Rico. She looks like a little dolly. I marvell how the tulips push their way up through the snow. I miss that part of spring here. Aloha, Connie xxoo

Line Gauthier Date: 3/7/2020 7:39:00 AM So hopeful. Bring on the sun. Enjoyed your poem, Connie. Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/7/2020 2:02:00 PM Thank you Line. Have a great weekend! xxoo

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/7/2020 7:02:00 AM Beautiful glimpses of spring, Connie--enjoyed the imagery your poem evoked. All the best. Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/7/2020 1:49:00 PM Thank you Vijay. : ) xxoo

Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2020 5:28:00 AM absolutely delightful Connie you have captured spring so beautifully:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/7/2020 12:16:00 PM Thank you Jan. Our golden shower trees are all in bloom and they inspire. xxoo

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/7/2020 4:23:00 AM A wonderful season Connie, the earth becoming alive again. Tom Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/7/2020 12:15:00 PM Yes Tom. Our golden shower trees are in bloom and stunning to see all over. Thank you my friend. xxoo

Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/6/2020 11:06:00 PM Beautiful details, especially 'thin blanket of snow' - and 'smile with golden faces' - so optimistic! All the best in the contest- Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/7/2020 12:12:00 PM Thank you Michelle. I am celebrating my new preemie granddaughter weighing three pounds as of yesterday. She is two weeks old today. Her name is Cosette Coral. xxoo

John Watt Date: 3/6/2020 11:00:00 PM Connie, gorgeous write of flowers hearkening the coming of Spring. I love "Drinking up the sun as morning warmth embraces". Beautiful poetry ~ John Login to Reply John Watt Date: 3/7/2020 12:34:00 PM Connie, I'm praying for your little Cosette Coral. She is your little flower pushing her way up through the snow! Hugs ~ John Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/7/2020 12:09:00 PM Thank you John. I marvel at how flowers can push their way up through the snow, though that will never happen here in the tropics. : ) xxoo

Susan Ashley Date: 3/6/2020 10:03:00 PM Oh, how beautifully visualized, Connie. I can just see 'cascades of dainty narcissus' with their golden cups full of sunshine. A poem rich with the feelings of hope and renewal. Exquisite, dear poetess. Warmest wishes for you and best wishes for a win.. ~Susan Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/7/2020 12:07:00 PM Thank you very much Susan. You always leave such lovely comments. This was much appreciated! xxoo