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Early Snow - Collaboration With Chris Green

Winter came early that year Between colours of the rainbow snowflakes maneuvered floated up whirled down Frigid winds chilled our smiles as drifts line the pathway of fresh footprints indentations two by two You asked me for some warmth I offered you my mittens Because my hands were needed for snowballs That is when you began giggling then kissed me shivering I closed my eyes Forgetting The cold On your hair snowflakes played hide and seek, behind us the undergrowth surprisingly split and Whap, you hit me with a snow ball when I wasn’t looking I reached down with my hand and scooped You up, and while holding you tightly fell in the snow backwards... Two smiling, overheated frantically flailing snow angels *** October 15, 2017 Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White
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Date: 10/25/2017 12:15:00 PM
What a great collab, applause and standing ovation my friend.
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Darren White
Date: 11/26/2017 12:55:00 PM
Thank you Richard :)
Date: 10/17/2017 6:43:00 PM
Love the imagery, snow fights are fun :-) and I do miss them , great shape great write, Darren and Chris. Hugs Eve
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Darren White
Date: 10/18/2017 12:33:00 AM
Thank you, Eve :)
Date: 10/17/2017 11:47:00 AM
A beautiful snapshot of an innocent blooming friendship, Darren and Chris. This is one heartwarming write, fellas. Keep 'em coming you two. Lovely collab poem. Pure poetry. Love an hugs, bros.
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Darren White
Date: 10/18/2017 12:33:00 AM
We love writing poems together, thanks my friend :)
Date: 10/17/2017 6:38:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Darren and Chris. I especially enjoyed the snowflakes playing hide and seek, such a delightful image.
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Darren White
Date: 10/18/2017 12:32:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, glad you like it :)
Date: 10/16/2017 3:20:00 PM
Very cute including the image!
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Darren White
Date: 10/17/2017 2:26:00 AM
Haha, isn't Olaf a cutie indeed? Thanks Kim :)
Date: 10/16/2017 3:14:00 PM
Snow angels! This is a fun one!! :D Another wonderful collaboration - it is so good to see you both writing again <3
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Darren White
Date: 10/17/2017 2:25:00 AM
Thanks Sara, I know how much you love snow angels :)
Date: 10/16/2017 2:26:00 PM
Aw you guys rock :) this is such a sweet fun penning! xomo x2
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Darren White
Date: 10/17/2017 2:25:00 AM
Aww Mo, thank you :)
Date: 10/16/2017 1:21:00 PM
absolutely beautiful imagery Chris and Darren I love the story that you wove with your lines and it is SO SO wonderful to see you both writing together again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 2:16:00 PM
We love writing together, Jan, thanks :)
Date: 10/16/2017 1:05:00 PM
Hi Darren, You and Chris penned a good collaboration. I remember playing in the snow for the first time as adult and you know what? It was the best feeling ever. I felt like a big kid. It was a memory that I hold dear and never forgot how felt that day. You and Chris write well together. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, it was fun, wasn't it? Playing in the snow :)
Date: 10/16/2017 12:35:00 PM
What a warm, cuddly feeling in this wintry collaboration, well done Darren and Chris...
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Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thanks Charlie! :)
Date: 10/16/2017 12:16:00 PM
Your beautiful collaboration inspired my haiku, thank you. ............................snow Angels.................... ................surprising winter weddings.............. ........................snowflake confetti
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Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 2:14:00 PM
aha, I am honored to be a source of inspiration :)
Date: 10/16/2017 12:07:00 PM
How loving! Playing in the snow, it brings out the kid in everyone, well, except Scrooge. Even got him I'm the end. It sounds idyllic.
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Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 2:12:00 PM
It does, doesn't it? :)
Date: 10/16/2017 10:47:00 AM
Playful imagery--warm feeling of love!
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Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 2:11:00 PM
I agree Vijay :) Thank you
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