Early Morning, With Elsa

When we leave the house this morning,
into the half light of the early dawn
from home’s warmth to cheek-slapping cold,
high in the western sky the bright New Moon
hangs like a silver penny there
innocently watching over the grey
mist shrouded secrets of the river.

We follow the path down to the water’s edge,
as the ducks shout out their clam’rous challenge
see the moon now greet the dawning eastern light
caught like a paper lantern in the branches
of skeleton trees while, shining from the bridge,
lights of gold and silver, like jewelled pearls
linger in reflection and await the rising sun.

12/1/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Inman Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:57 PM
Great similes in a beautifully image filled poem. Kim.
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February 8, 2020 at 4:39 PM
Very creative descriptions, Kim. I especially like the way you describe the moon as a paper lantern hanging through tree branches. Enjoyed! Best wishes, Carolyn
Rees Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 11:40 AM
Lovely imagery. I feel I'm there !
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