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Early Morning Warning

There once was this lady I was desiring
Upon meeting she became so damn tiring
She kept me up all night
And fatigued I took fright
I hope that it was blanks I was firing

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Gert W. Knop

January 20, 2011 at 7:28 AM

Great Limerick, perfectly püenned, James! Enjoyed the read! ....Gert

Deb Radke

January 20, 2011 at 6:32 AM

James, this is perfect. A 10+. The meter, the words and the 'laugh out loud' ending. I love this. Thanks for all the kind comments you have left recently about my work. I am trying to catch up on reading on the site. So many good poems lately. But this is one of the best limericks I have ever read. It needs to perhaps be submitted somewhere... I think it's that good. Best wishes. Love, Deb

Carolyn Devonshire

January 19, 2011 at 12:19 PM

James, Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 19, 2011 at 6:22 AM

Congratulations James on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

January 19, 2011 at 3:50 AM

James after all the work you did all night you want it to amount to nothing????? lol, I love this loads Mr. F ;) I see you won as well, congratulations and thanks for the laughs ~

Deirdre Omaidin

January 19, 2011 at 3:07 AM

Hilarious, congratulations, Déirdre

Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2011 at 8:34 PM

James, I find this one really amusing!! Congrats on the win. LUv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

January 18, 2011 at 8:28 PM

hahaha Many congratulations for this victory.

Carrie Richards

January 18, 2011 at 3:53 PM

OOOOOps....how did I miss those shots ( or blanks ) heard around the world??? !! Funny funny!!! (LOVED your comment left on my silly limerick !!!)

Debbie Guzzi

January 18, 2011 at 2:54 PM

If I had long arms I'd HUG you too. LOL

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 18, 2011 at 12:50 PM

Congrats James on your HM in the Limerick contest .. a great one... enjoy your special honor with luv..

Sara Kendrick

January 18, 2011 at 9:37 AM

Congratulations..Sara

Kory Calhoun

January 18, 2011 at 8:33 AM

Hi James - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

James Peranteau

January 17, 2011 at 1:59 PM

Very amusing James, funny, (and serious as all) ! *smiles* great write Sir ! much love, james

Sharon Ruebel

January 17, 2011 at 1:53 PM

Hello James, HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Good One As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

January 17, 2011 at 12:40 PM

LOL Very funny, James! The last line is a riot. Good luck if this is for Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 12:38 PM

I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments James. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. The best to you always. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

January 17, 2011 at 11:59 AM

lol! Riotous humor, James! Thanks for the laughter this Monday afternoon! Always, Annalise

Caryl Muzzey

January 17, 2011 at 11:59 AM

Great write and a very funny entry for the contest. Good luck. Thanks for your wonderful coments on mine, James. Caryl

Kory Calhoun

January 17, 2011 at 11:46 AM

Great limerick. Good luck in the contest. KC

Skat A

January 16, 2011 at 7:40 PM

lol. james i hope it was blanks toooo. enjoyed~skat

Debbie Guzzi

January 16, 2011 at 5:03 PM

Good one Jamie line 2 make it Upon and then you have the same syllable count in both lines, line 4 add "and fatigued" line 5 add a sylable ex. I hope that it was...L & L