Early Morning At Riverside Park

Independence Day is over
A sweltering night has been gathered up and trucked away
                                                                 
The faint fragrance of burnt offering still hangs low
                       ....like sweat, of a long, grey cloak.

The park still echos with faint "ooooh's" and "ahhhs"...
lingering in the sultry air, 
and bouncing off the silent bandstand
If you try, you can almost hear the High School band, 
   playing tributes to Souza and the homeland flag

Where eyes glistened and reflected a night sky alive with fire
now, the only sounds are chattering squirrels, 
              as they scurry and nibble on remants of a celebratory feast, 
                  hiding in the dewy grass

The morning air is cool and the ground is damp
Park benches, the bandstand, hilly mounds of grass and playgrounds
                                      abandoned, save of their mourning clothes
Of candy wrappers, watermelon rinds, mustard coated paper plates
Spent sparklers, fire crackers, a lone sneaker...
Where just hours ago..music from radios, laughter, cheering, hooting, jeering
Deafening man-made thunder made babies cry
                    dogs tremble, children clap their hands over ears
Now so silent in this early somber morn
The only sound this morning
 comes from a slight breeze that stirs....
   a tossed Pepsi paper cup....
       as it clatters a pop, pop, popping tune...as it hops
                        among the dried, brown leaves down a hot, empty sidewalk...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Orozco Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 1:23 PM
Beautiful form! - eduardo
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 5:19 PM
The aftermath of a great holiday. Vince
Williams Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 4:42 AM
The morning after mood and atmosphere beautifully transcribed.... Carrie.... thanks for the comment
Lokken Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 2:32 PM
I am grateful for the freedom we have in this country....and you have depicted the attitude of many Americans, after the glitter and glammer is over, we forget. The atmosphere of this was unbreathed perfectly.....Love, Sara:)
Freeman Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 1:08 PM
A realistic picture of riverside after and independence day, good write, in spite, of the messy sight,ha! Thanks for comment on blog, love ye for it, Moses
Higgins Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 1:04 PM
Thank you for the comments today Carrie..your words are always so uplifting..this is a very cool write...I love these walks that you take with your poetry..wonderful picture painted...enjoyable read.
Goff Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 4:32 PM
ahhh!!! only a true poet sees beyond today!!! I wish I could write like this!! and thanks for generous comments! Carrie...jim
Christian Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 8:13 AM
awww a great write, we only see it on tv or internet it must be fantastic celebrating hands on, thanks for all your kind comments God bless you from diane
Strand Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 12:32 AM
Veru wistful words Carrie Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Rgds Brian
Devonshire Avatar
July 4, 2009 at 10:47 PM
You know, I think you made me realize how it must have been the morning after the real "bombs burst in air." It is almost Sunday morning now and I'm sure some of the litter you describe will be spread throughout the nearby park. Gives a whole new meaning to "the morning after." Great work, Carrie! Love, carolyn
Ginn Avatar
July 4, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Yuck what a mess, it's so sad.
Fish Avatar
July 4, 2009 at 9:48 AM
You had me walking right along with you Carie. Very nice and what a nice end to the exening before. Thank you... ~<><
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