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Early Morning At Riverside Park

Independence Day is over A sweltering night has been gathered up and trucked away The faint fragrance of burnt offering still hangs low ....like sweat, of a long, grey cloak. The park still echos with faint "ooooh's" and "ahhhs"... lingering in the sultry air, and bouncing off the silent bandstand If you try, you can almost hear the High School band, playing tributes to Souza and the homeland flag Where eyes glistened and reflected a night sky alive with fire now, the only sounds are chattering squirrels, as they scurry and nibble on remants of a celebratory feast, hiding in the dewy grass The morning air is cool and the ground is damp Park benches, the bandstand, hilly mounds of grass and playgrounds abandoned, save of their mourning clothes Of candy wrappers, watermelon rinds, mustard coated paper plates Spent sparklers, fire crackers, a lone sneaker... Where just hours ago..music from radios, laughter, cheering, hooting, jeering Deafening man-made thunder made babies cry dogs tremble, children clap their hands over ears Now so silent in this early somber morn The only sound this morning comes from a slight breeze that stirs.... a tossed Pepsi paper cup.... as it clatters a pop, pop, popping tune...as it hops among the dried, brown leaves down a hot, empty sidewalk...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/10/2009 1:23:00 PM
Beautiful form! - eduardo
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Date: 7/9/2009 5:19:00 PM
The aftermath of a great holiday. Vince
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Date: 7/7/2009 4:42:00 AM
The morning after mood and atmosphere beautifully transcribed.... Carrie.... thanks for the comment
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Date: 7/6/2009 2:32:00 PM
I am grateful for the freedom we have in this country....and you have depicted the attitude of many Americans, after the glitter and glammer is over, we forget. The atmosphere of this was unbreathed perfectly.....Love, Sara:)
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Date: 7/6/2009 1:08:00 PM
A realistic picture of riverside after and independence day, good write, in spite, of the messy sight,ha! Thanks for comment on blog, love ye for it, Moses
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Date: 7/6/2009 1:04:00 PM
Thank you for the comments today Carrie..your words are always so uplifting..this is a very cool write...I love these walks that you take with your poetry..wonderful picture painted...enjoyable read.
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Date: 7/5/2009 4:32:00 PM
ahhh!!! only a true poet sees beyond today!!! I wish I could write like this!! and thanks for generous comments! Carrie...jim
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Date: 7/5/2009 8:13:00 AM
awww a great write, we only see it on tv or internet it must be fantastic celebrating hands on, thanks for all your kind comments God bless you from diane
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Date: 7/5/2009 12:32:00 AM
Veru wistful words Carrie Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/4/2009 10:47:00 PM
You know, I think you made me realize how it must have been the morning after the real "bombs burst in air." It is almost Sunday morning now and I'm sure some of the litter you describe will be spread throughout the nearby park. Gives a whole new meaning to "the morning after." Great work, Carrie! Love, carolyn
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Date: 7/4/2009 2:08:00 PM
Yuck what a mess, it's so sad.
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Date: 7/4/2009 9:48:00 AM
You had me walking right along with you Carie. Very nice and what a nice end to the exening before. Thank you... ~<><
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