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Early Morning

I stepped out early on a winters morning, Still half asleep and quietly yawning. The street lights cast a yellow glow, That fell upon the virgin snow. Lights coming on in houses, As I walked the silent streets. I took pleasure in the crump, Of untrodden snow beneath my feet. The cold air bit at my face, Sharp as a butchers knife. A pristine morning to myself, A wonderland, of snow and ice. Soon enough, the streets will fill People going to and fro, But for a while as they slept, I revelled in the snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/6/2019 10:14:00 AM
Great write Gary, very descriptive with nice rhyme too. This paints such originality of a winter morning with the crispness of the morning air.
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Gary Smith
Date: 3/6/2019 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Gordon. :)
Date: 11/8/2016 4:50:00 PM
Really nicely written poetic winter scene. I enjoyed this.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/8/2016 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Chris.

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