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Early Morning

Early Morning I wish to capture in some way, With words, the ineffable Images, and sounds of quiet, In a time without man sounds. Early morning awakened by The first glimmer of orange red As it begins to rise phoenix like Across the lake. Incongruous images blended together, deck railing covered with beach towels, swim suits, life jackets. Sandals with the obligate passengers of sand. Cool, windless, no sound of noise, except the Bountiful nature noise That exists in my silence. Conversations of squirrels As they sit sending their messages From the high floating needle fingers of white pines. The subtle whir, phantom like, of ruby breasted humming birds At the feeder, jockeying for position. Persistent bird songs, Celebrating, welcoming, And then the exploring pileated wood pecker On pine overgrown, over ripe. Nothing moves except the cacophony of sounds. No requirement to categorize each sound, Only to listen to the sibilant blend, and record in your mind the palette of colors That surround you, the palette of sounds. House quiet within-as is the Glassy lake with mist rising, Ephemeral gauzy, translucent. The orchestral sounds of silence Play out against the rising orb. In its rising, the silhouette fills out, Mists rising within its climb. Now a brilliant blaze of focused energy with a yellow shell, Then a ball of incandescent light, searing to behold, Incandescent memories. May 2, 2021

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Date: 5/12/2021 1:26:00 PM
Hi David. I like the way your first stanza sets out your aims for the rest of the poem. Poems can mean different things to different people. In these times of lockdown I'm reminded by your poem how I'm finding nature's sounds to be much louder. I think you excel describing moments, imagery and moments of imagery in your poems. "Early Morning" is no exception. Congratulations. Cheers - Gary
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David Holmes
Date: 5/12/2021 2:08:00 PM
Gary - thank you for your comments, and yes, during lockdown the sounds of nature have become much louder, and the silence of nature has taken on a different meaning as well. I always appreciate your comments, thank you again for reading and taking the time to comment on this poem, David
Date: 5/12/2021 12:46:00 PM
Lovely writing... Enjoyed. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 5/12/2021 2:11:00 PM
Gina, thank you for your comment am glad you enjoyed - Blessings to you as well David
Date: 5/12/2021 4:55:00 AM
i really enjoyed reading this, it contains some lovely images and wording and captures the early morning so vividly..(i just noticed on the 32nd line an extra 'the' you may want to correct that) - congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 5/12/2021 12:16:00 PM
Dear Charlotte - thank you so much, it was a lovely morning, and thank you for catching the extra "the" - I have gone in and made the correction. David
Date: 5/10/2021 10:47:00 AM
Ah!!! The serene quiet.... Felt so calm after reading your poem!!
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Date: 5/12/2021 12:14:00 PM
Dear Smita - thank you - it was serene and a calming morning when I wrote this - David
Date: 5/3/2021 11:28:00 PM
Soo serene :) your beautiful descriptive words paint such a delightful picture in my mind:) thank you for the holiday in your thoughts ;)
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David Holmes
Date: 5/4/2021 1:59:00 PM
Melody - thank you so much for your comments and glad I could bring a holiday to your thoughts, David
Date: 5/3/2021 3:23:00 PM
Beautiful and peaceful David :)
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Date: 5/4/2021 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Heidi - David

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