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Early Memory


early nightfall fondling skin
on glowing shafts from a world
so blind my body enters
cramps of memory

Writing Challenge-Dodoitsu Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France 10/01/2020

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2020

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Andrea Dietrich

October 12, 2020 at 11:09 AM

so lovely, dear!! Belated Congrats.

October 7, 2020 at 6:58 AM

You created a view of Autumn as it moves into winter with lovely expression. congrats on your first place win.

Constance La France

October 5, 2020 at 7:29 AM

Nette, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me.

October 4, 2020 at 8:33 PM

Lovely poem Nette....Congrats on your win.

Linda Alice Fowler

October 4, 2020 at 12:28 PM

Oh I like this a lot Nette! Congratulations! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 4, 2020 at 11:53 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

October 3, 2020 at 9:30 AM

Very nice Nette.

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