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Early March

EARLY MARCH March Swirls Little twisters Lift maple crotch high Sky A roof Tent of circus blue Dazzles the eye Life Inhales Twiggy scurry Rushing by Sudden New Strange sensation Crows hidden cry “Coming Coming! Yet distant Spring by and by”

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/15/2010 6:13:00 PM

you've got that right Daver! I just saw the first flock of geese from a distance heading North . They is on their way ! Hang in there all. When you see 'em,, think of me ....pretend I sent them for you! :) Cool write Daver. Thanks for your comments. (you always get it ) common sense and wisdom gets it every time./ Your friend Robert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2010 6:47:00 AM

Exciting write that you have given us in this one ...Very precise wording and yet descriptive...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Skat A

Date: 3/13/2010 10:02:00 PM

Yes I read this one !! MARCH my favorite...

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/13/2010 9:55:00 AM

Very delightful and lovely feelings to mark the beginning of Spring, which always moves and thrills us with its universal appeals and charms. Beautiful words and wonderful Poem. I have also placed a poem on this beautiful season 'To ever Young Spring'. Hope you would like it with the ‘Good Morning’. Best wishes, love and regards.........Ravindra...Daver Aust.

Constance La France

Date: 3/12/2010 8:57:00 AM

I am also waiting for Spring to arrive here in Canada, actually our weather lately is very nice... I love how you created this poem, enchanting and anticipating... Constance

Date: 3/11/2010 5:37:00 AM

Interesting perspective for a creative view. Nice use of personification. Keep on writing!! Karen

Skat A

Date: 3/10/2010 11:04:00 AM

Had fun reading . March is my favriote month.. I love the greeeeen...

Brian Strand

Date: 3/9/2010 11:59:00 PM

Pleasant poetry Daver.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/9/2010 8:00:00 PM

Interesting poem and thought process here, Daver. Yes, Spring is definitely in the air. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

James Foulk

Date: 3/9/2010 1:47:00 PM

a great poem waiting for spring to come. thank you for reading my erika renee and for your comment

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/9/2010 1:28:00 PM

Love this delight! It's coming, it's coming.....but tell it to hurry....please!!! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2010 12:11:00 PM

KInd of reminds me of an ee cummings poem but with actual capitalization. haha. Very nice one for spring, Daver! Luv, Andrea

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/9/2010 7:22:00 AM

Love it Dave-r..it just trips off the tongue How are you ? Did someone tell me you have a book out? Tell me about it..BG