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Early March

EARLY MARCH

March
Swirls
Little twisters
Lift maple crotch high

Sky
A roof
Tent of circus blue
Dazzles the eye

Life
Inhales
Twiggy    scurry
Rushing by

Sudden
New
Strange sensation
Crows    hidden    cry

“Coming
Coming!
Yet distant
Spring    by and by”

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/15/2010 6:13:00 PM

you've got that right Daver! I just saw the first flock of geese from a distance heading North . They is on their way ! Hang in there all. When you see 'em,, think of me ....pretend I sent them for you! :) Cool write Daver. Thanks for your comments. (you always get it ) common sense and wisdom gets it every time./ Your friend Robert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2010 6:47:00 AM

Exciting write that you have given us in this one ...Very precise wording and yet descriptive...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Skat A

Date: 3/13/2010 10:02:00 PM

Yes I read this one !! MARCH my favorite...

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/13/2010 9:55:00 AM

Very delightful and lovely feelings to mark the beginning of Spring, which always moves and thrills us with its universal appeals and charms. Beautiful words and wonderful Poem. I have also placed a poem on this beautiful season 'To ever Young Spring'. Hope you would like it with the ‘Good Morning’. Best wishes, love and regards.........Ravindra...Daver Aust.

Constance La France

Date: 3/12/2010 8:57:00 AM

I am also waiting for Spring to arrive here in Canada, actually our weather lately is very nice... I love how you created this poem, enchanting and anticipating... Constance