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Early Hours

........ facing eastwards. Cool, still, expectant. The sky, the ground, are one. Soon a subtle transition. One-ness becomes polarised. The monochrome breaks. Half-light above. Half-night below. From the greys contrast comes, pulls shape and form from shadow. A vague sketch of skyline. Sky and ground thus defined. Now, for the solar spectrum. The horizon, a blaze of red-orange. Ribbons of cirrus, luminous yellow-white. Aloft, reflects the blue-violet. Centre stage, the star turn, amber burn. A new day now born.

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Date: 5/2/2020 3:36:00 AM
You have a flare for this type of poem that I find takes one there. There are places in NZ that would I think compare Lockdown a good time to share. I will read more of your work to compare with this one here. Best regards David in NZ. I follow Viv Wigley do you know of him. He is from Derby I believe.
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 5/3/2020 2:11:00 PM
Hello David. Many thanks for your comment and pleased you enjoyed the read. I spend a lot of time in these Pennine hills then attempt to use words to paint a picture. I'm sure there are NZ skylines that compare and, likely, offer their own character to excite the poet. I have looked at some of Viv's poems. Take care. Tony

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