Early Hours

........ facing eastwards.
Cool, still, expectant.
The sky, the ground, are one.
Soon a subtle transition.
One-ness becomes polarised. 
The monochrome breaks. 
Half-light above. Half-night below. 
From the greys contrast comes, 
pulls shape and form from shadow. 
A vague sketch of skyline.
Sky and ground thus defined. 

Now, for the solar spectrum.  
The horizon, a blaze of red-orange.
Ribbons of cirrus, luminous yellow-white. 
Aloft, reflects the blue-violet.
Centre stage, the star turn, amber burn. 
A new day now born.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/2/2020 3:36:00 AM
You have a flare for this type of poem that I find takes one there. There are places in NZ that would I think compare Lockdown a good time to share. I will read more of your work to compare with this one here. Best regards David in NZ. I follow Viv Wigley do you know of him. He is from Derby I believe.
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 5/3/2020 2:11:00 PM
Hello David. Many thanks for your comment and pleased you enjoyed the read. I spend a lot of time in these Pennine hills then attempt to use words to paint a picture. I'm sure there are NZ skylines that compare and, likely, offer their own character to excite the poet. I have looked at some of Viv's poems. Take care. Tony
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