Early Blossoms

All England, blinking nervously, is out! 
A little mild spell, much to our surprise, 
has brightened frowsy February skies. 
We sniff the air with nostrils schooled in doubt. 

Baffled by balm, the fruit trees have misfired. 
Like foolish virgins, hurrying on their scarves, 
They've pushed out blooms half-petaled and half-starved. 
The coming frosts will slice them like cheese-wire. 

And I have loved you far too eagerly. 
My half-cocked hopes have withered on the bough. 
I should have doled my sweets more meagerly - 
then, had I granted space, and time, and light, 
your hobbled feelings might have taken flight, 
in any time or place ... but England. Now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/14/2017 12:20:00 AM
Early 'bloomers'... It's so true, often (not always) You blossom fast, you burn out and down fast. But those incredibly hot fast burning crushes, they are also so attractive, if only the aftermath wasn't so painful. Cut off, exhausted, despair. No more blossom for a while, not even in the May season where it belongs. half enclosed rhyme, great caesura. Love it as always :)
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Darren White
Date: 3/14/2017 1:26:00 AM
Buenos días, amigo. You are early :)
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/14/2017 12:27:00 AM
Yes! Another awesome analysis, my firend.
Date: 3/13/2017 7:40:00 PM
By England, each day it does delight; Such a shear and spacious site; Towns with buildings here and there, Treated with much loving care. England will never end in my sight.
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/14/2017 12:28:00 AM
Terrific response, James!
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