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Early Bird

early bird sound catches my ear in the morning after my dreamy cup of coffee serenity tweets sent with love from a robin, phoebe or jay serenading this address just before the tick-tock of seven the little birdie put its sights on the oak overlooking the mossy yard incomprehensibly touched by the ephemeral landing as if i can feel the bird’s beak in my auricle - elated as if i were sitting on the bough right next to this sweetheart did the chief bird say “it’s showtime!” each one assigned mine was the sweetest taste of dawn with lackluster sun

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Date: 7/18/2023 9:11:00 PM
Lovely poem describing a peaceful morning, Kim. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2023 11:15:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/18/2023 11:53:00 AM
Gorgeous writing, Kim!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2023 11:15:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Paige!
Date: 7/17/2023 6:00:00 PM
Early morning with a cup of coffee, watching the birds that alight on the trees is an auspicious beginning for a new day. Lovely poem resonant with the tweet of birds.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2023 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/17/2023 7:56:00 AM
- What a lovely morning time, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2023 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!

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