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Eap-Gleam

The midnight stars still gleam:

and the dark sky just beams

with the light bouncing off the stream

by the end of the night it always seems

as the day goes by the light controls my dreams

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 17, 2010 at 7:07 AM this flowed really well and somehow I can also relate to this :) I could just picture this so well in my head :) Good luck in the contest :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 15, 2010 at 3:41 AM Very nice eap poem, Brandee. Good luck in Brian's contest. (And thank you for commenting on my poetry.) Lovingly, Dane Ann

Margaret Foster January 14, 2010 at 6:15 PM A nice steady rise in rhythm to this piece. good luck in the contest. Many thanks for reading my efforts. ---Margaret

Elaine George January 14, 2010 at 1:04 PM Beautiful, dear Brandee. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie

Joyce Johnson January 14, 2010 at 1:01 PM Nice work. good luck in the contest. Thanks for your comments. Love, joyce

Brian Strand January 13, 2010 at 11:59 PM Thank you for supporting my contest,Brandee Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards January 13, 2010 at 4:32 PM Very nicely done! ~ love, Carrie

Barbara Gorelick January 13, 2010 at 4:06 PM Good luck in the contest..this is very nice.BG

Carolyn Devonshire January 13, 2010 at 3:13 PM Lovely image of the stars on the stream. Like the thought that the light they emit might actually follow you into dreamland. Nice entry for Brian's contest, Brandee. Good luck! Love, Carolyn