Eap: I'M Free

A few days after Big Daddy's death
In the night don't really know if asleep
And the man appeared to me, spoke deep
Of the assurance the he's alright, so sleep
In the vision he said I'm free, no pain, don't weep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/15/2010 9:31:00 PM
I am just now seening some of the rest of the winners of this contest. A big belated congratulations to you, sara. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/28/2010 8:34:00 AM
Sara, thank you Sis, for supporting my contest with your poem. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2010 5:48:00 PM
Dear Sara, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/27/2010 4:11:00 PM
Very cool, Sara and heartening. Congrats to you.-Robert
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:38:00 AM
Very interesting write, Sara. My father appeared to me in a dream after his death as well. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:28:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Moses contest.. a most wonderful write for a wonderful win.. from a wonderful poetess... whom I luv to read every day..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/22/2010 7:32:00 PM
Sara, I want to gracious thank you for supporting my contest. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 1/16/2010 1:21:00 PM
OH, it looks like you are speaking of that true expience you had? Good idea to use it here, Sara! Is this the one for the contest? If so , good luck, dear, and thanks for your comment on mine.
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Date: 1/15/2010 9:37:00 PM
Interesting write, Sara! Good luck on Brian's contest. And thank you for your nice comments on my poem today. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/15/2010 12:27:00 PM
Precious, mom-thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:53:00 AM
Great eap, Sara. The day before my father died, he kissed my hand, he had done that before. 3 days after he died, I was in bed , laying there awake in such grief, then I felt a kiss on my hand , not imagined but real. It know it was my father letting me know everything was alringt. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:33:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. I love the sentiment it has. Sorry for your loss. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 1/15/2010 4:21:00 AM
Sara, I do believe that after death, our loved ones sometimes come back to comfort some of the heartbroken ones left behind. I am glad that you had this experience whether it be dream or vision. Enjoyed the poem. (And thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry.) Love to you and your family. Dane Ann
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Date: 1/14/2010 5:42:00 PM
This is a heart tugging poem, one has to believe that the loved one is in a better place...we grieve for ourselves. Lovely entry to the contest, Sara! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/14/2010 5:42:00 PM
Like the difference between liquid water and frozen Ice. The power of our love essence is the ether particles of spirit, while out bodies are stable dimensions of form of the spirit's particles. The difference between our body and the freedom of the spirit. The freedom of the water(Spirit) of life flows freely. Smile. God(Love) has it all under control. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/14/2010 5:09:00 PM
NIce one, Sara, it reminds me of how I felt when my dog appeared to me in a dream when he (possibly had just) died. Do you think it could really be? He was with other people , I don't know who ever got him. And to this day, i would like to believe it was his spirt seeing me on his way to heaven. LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/14/2010 4:31:00 PM
Ah, comfort from your Big Daddy! Even beyond the big sleep! Good job, Sara! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/14/2010 2:47:00 PM
It may have been a dream, Sara, but I do believe we are free of suffering after death. That thought helps us cope with loss. Very good poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/14/2010 2:02:00 PM
Very spiritual, great list poem Sara! Truly enjoyed. Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/14/2010 1:39:00 PM
Well written list Sara >> James
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