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Eap-A Ship

A ship tossed like a cork with the wind And the waves lapping in the gale As the creator never fails with the lungs exhale the salty spray of the whale's tail. Inspired by Brian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/3/2010 6:18:00 PM
With just the right amount of barnacle and salt for this old sea dog. Wishing I was back in the seafaring day. A very cleaver yarn you have spun. Mac
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Date: 1/15/2010 5:00:00 AM
Great entry, Doris! I could even taste the salty spray, well done And good luck!
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Date: 1/14/2010 4:41:00 PM
A great subject for this short form of poetry!! What a terrific entry!! Good luck, Doris! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/14/2010 4:28:00 PM
Great idea for this contest. Good luck. Mom
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Date: 1/14/2010 12:59:00 PM
a very enjoyable read with this one, Doris! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/14/2010 8:52:00 AM
Truly a magnificent image of the splashing whale's tail, Doris. This is one of the best list poems I've read for Brian's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/14/2010 8:49:00 AM
Bravo Doris. This is a cool write, the way you've put it together. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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