Each Star Has A Pattern All Of It’s Own

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A gold sailboat for souls Each star is marked The celestial embodiment Of hazel hope floating Empowered by heavenly heart Silvery universal art Illuminating onyx sky so dark Read by those inclined to see More than most humanly possible A joyful journey to destination Burning brightly in anticipation of Of the next destination

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/2/2025 7:09:00 PM

Karen, I see this in two different ways. We are the stars or we use the stars to help navigate from place to place in life. I think I prefer the first interpretation. It's a very pleasant and optimistic description, That is a reflection of your kind soul. Something you can't hide! Smiles!!

Karen Jones
Date: 4/3/2025 12:33:00 AM

Yes I feel we are the stars in this poem. But in another one of my poems I ponder what if falling stars are tears from God. Thanks for your encouraging and kind words!