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Each Passing Cloud

On lazy summer days, carefree, I used to gaze at endless sky, And guess the shapes of clouds go by, Wondering who I'd want to be. Eyes followed fast my fancy fate, Before the clouds would dissipate. An elephant stuck on a twig? A monkey on a shopping spree? A tiger swinging on a tree? A hairless cat wearing a wig? Or maybe if the cloud turned dark - A wild wolf or a hungry shark? I have grown up, so did the clouds - Not always on their brightest side, Not always my fate's trusted guide - Showered over my sky with doubts. As with my cherished long time friends We moved along and made amends. With every passing cloud I find - Regardless of what shape or hue, As shades of grey turn back to blue - A silver lining's left behind. Childhood clear clouds will always be Part of my past and part of me. March 4, 2023

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Date: 4/14/2023 3:35:00 PM
"as shades of grey turn back to blue, a silver lining's left behind..." so lovely, Margarita. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/19/2023 8:06:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
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Date: 3/18/2023 12:59:00 PM
Your poem is lovely, Margarita. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/18/2023 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Summer and clouds go together. Have a blessed day/weekend.........................
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/18/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Paula!
Date: 3/18/2023 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem, Maggie.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/18/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thank you DT!
Date: 3/8/2023 9:03:00 AM
You've intertwined these images with a consciousness of a life examined. :)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/18/2023 12:25:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/7/2023 9:13:00 AM
Everyone should stop and let the inner child out to dream among the clouds. Very well written, Maggie. may you always dream among the clouds:)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/18/2023 12:24:00 PM
I prefer them in summer:)
Date: 3/5/2023 12:24:00 AM
This is a lovely lulling poem, I predict a win!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/5/2023 10:05:00 AM
If I launched a kite into the clouds, I could perhaps win the race:)
Date: 3/4/2023 6:55:00 AM
Lovely words. I love clouds. Poetry in motion. Thanks for so beautifully describing them.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/4/2023 8:21:00 AM
Oh thank you, Peter.

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