Each inch of my niche

The whirlwind rolled in rings at the eyewall,
Wild gale blew through the open tropical field.
I'd forgotten to close the windows tight,
And the ensuing rain inundated each inch of my niche.
The hurricane hurriedly stripped the veld of its peace.

Dry air pacified the expanse of the grassland,
The massive flood drained into a sunken cesspool,
My thoughts swayed to the windows the storm had slammed,
Now a zephyr traverses the meadow's breath;
Calmness fills the eye of the once-raging storm.
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August 30, 2025 at 4:38 AM
Could you please resend your Soup Mail as I can't open - it has no subject (heading). Thanks
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August 30, 2025 at 5:21 AM
Okay. I just resnt it now. Sorry for the inconvenience. Love. Maclawrence.
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August 30, 2025 at 3:56 AM
Congratulations, Maclawrence, on winning 3rd place in my contest, Go Fish. Please send me your e-mail address via Soup Mail to claim your prize of the e-book in which your poem appears - with your permission. Regards, Su
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August 30, 2025 at 5:22 AM
Thanks for the placement and the book prize.
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