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dystopian

Dystopian  

When I see in modern homes, blank walls
not disturbed by art, the center of peace 
an outside sofa for a whole family to sit
until a dad is arrested for child abuse
In the building, most families have gone 
on a few days holiday, at the same place
in the Algarve, returning on Monday and
talk about it for weeks
When I had a small house in the outer 
Algarve I was often visited by a Swiss 
lady, small of stature and full of energy
often brought me gifts of things she
had made, which I put on the wall
She had the annoying habit of asking me 
question about my life, which I at first disliked
but got to like, which I didn't ask of myself
too much trouble to find an answer.
One day, when she didn't come, I drove to her 
place, they told me she had gone back to the Swiss
she must have been in her nineties or so
She had written several books that disturbed
me, did she use me as a material for
an upcoming book?
my dream of a simple life, a dog, and a house
near the woods, didn't materialize, so many
mostly women intruded, they left, when they
gave up saving me from me and a simple life
Now that I'm old, their faces erased
a blimp on my journey towards my destruction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 8/17/2024 1:16:00 PM
Wow, Jan, an interesting write! Did she study, use you, attempt to save you from yourself (?) There was one man (a movie) where he seemed content in his life but then was made to see the life he could have had. Some felt that he was bothered for no reason. Your poem reminds me of this. Fave for me.
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