Dynamite

I must have been six years old When my Dad came home one day He had a shoe box under his arm What’s in it? He wouldn’t say Mom said it’s a surprise for you It’s something that’s really great You can see it after dinner If you both clean your plate My bro and I scoffed it down We just couldn’t wait to see When Dad took off the lid We were happy as can be A Boston terrier puppy dog As tiny as he could be His Mom wouldn’t feed her pups That’s why we got him for free No solid food for several weeks An eye dropper used to feed The first two weeks were nip and tuck But then he grew like a weed My Dad said “it’s your dog boys” Come up with a name that’s right We thought, we fought and finally agreed So we named him “Dynamite”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/14/2011 9:41:00 PM
I thought there was going to be dynamite in the box =) hehehe.
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:41:00 PM
Great poem. Perfect name! Lee
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:27:00 PM
:)... for some reason, this reminds me of a poem I've loved since my childhood that starts, "I'm hiding, I'm hiding and no one knows where..."
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