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Dying Marriage

they speak in echoes tightening strands of sorrow hang the rings of gold

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Julia Ward

Date: 9/20/2015 4:44:00 AM

The line, "hang the rings of gold" works wonderfully in your poem. Julia, xx

Viv Wigley
Date: 9/20/2015 11:06:00 AM

Thanks, Julia, I think that, given it's simplicity and economy, Senryu can be very effective. Nice of you to blow the dust off this one. Viv x

James Inman

Date: 9/11/2015 12:15:00 PM

Viv, had a newlywed couple ask me what was the secret to marriage at about 1:00 this morning. I told them there is no secret, marriage is not magic, I work at Disney World. Being honest and open has worked pretty well for me.

Viv Wigley
Date: 9/20/2015 11:09:00 AM

Honesty and respect- stronger than any gold band. Thanks for dropping by, James,regards, Viv

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/27/2015 8:10:00 AM

So true. I am lucky--my wife still puts up with my crazy habits.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/28/2015 3:27:00 AM

Yes, females are a very tolerant bunch. Thanks for popping by, Duke.

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 3/25/2015 6:31:00 AM

Masterpiece!...few words, many emotions...Peter

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/28/2015 3:26:00 AM

Thanks, Peter.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/24/2015 11:47:00 PM

What a powerful write. You worded things so well. No one said marriage would be easy....It takes commitment...it takes sacrifice. For some...the price is too high. Thanks for your visits to my work. Much appreciated.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/25/2015 3:30:00 AM

Thanks, Jade. Ps- Like your new picture; you're looking very happy in your skin. Viv x