Dying Leaves

I observe the only leaf descend from the bare maple tree winging low, drifting and freely curling amidst the nipped air to quiver on the damp alley. It joins about a larger heap-- all leaves rustling together in place; that watching their frail body- movement, a line of tear flows down on my cheeks. Strewn about by the restless blow of the wind, they tremble up and down as if to linger in a final circle of a waltz: How far the springtime while gust of flakes trail without pause... It is already late January, yet icy breeze grows more harsh more cruel with the ruin of threadbare leaves, laying like a hearse dumped by thick mantle of frost...grasping for a tinge of ray which could somehow bring or stir back any sign of resuscitated glow... instead, this foliage bleeds a final glory mirroring my numb love that dies with them to vanish into the night... ashen-black while I shed another tear and another. Best Free Verse This Year Contest of John Hamilton entered 3/21/2017

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Date: 3/23/2017 12:54:00 PM
Back to congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 3/22/2017 8:33:00 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats for your WIN, with this lovely piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/22/2017 12:09:00 AM
Simply beautiful! Congrats!!
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Date: 3/21/2017 7:40:00 PM
Beautifully written Nette, congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 3/15/2017 2:51:00 AM
Yesterday ended last night. Wake up and take your numb love with you before it dies. Give light, and the darkness will disappear by itself.... ...Magnificent write..
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Date: 3/14/2017 9:50:00 PM
Hypnotic, Nette. : )
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Date: 3/13/2017 4:55:00 PM
Incredible poem! Comparing the falling of leaves with love or fate in despair is out of the ordinary!
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Date: 3/13/2017 1:08:00 PM
Very nice, Nette, love the imagery hugs
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Date: 3/13/2017 12:38:00 AM
Beauty and sadness entwined together with love and nature it's only witness. Exquisite writing Nette :-) a pleasure to read. blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/12/2017 7:51:00 PM
A great poem, Nette. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
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