Dying Leaves

I observe the only leaf descend from the bare maple tree winging low, drifting and freely curling amidst the nipped air to quiver on the damp alley. It joins about a larger heap-- all leaves rustling together in place; that watching their frail body- movement, a line of tear flows down on my cheeks. Strewn about by the restless blow of the wind, they tremble up and down as if to linger in a final circle of a waltz: How far the springtime while gust of flakes trail without pause... It is already late January, yet icy breeze grows more harsh more cruel with the ruin of threadbare leaves, laying like a hearse dumped by thick mantle of frost...grasping for a tinge of ray which could somehow bring or stir back any sign of resuscitated glow... instead, this foliage bleeds a final glory mirroring my numb love that dies with them to vanish into the night... ashen-black while I shed another tear and another. Best Free Verse This Year Contest of John Hamilton entered 3/21/2017
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Roper Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Back to congratulations on your win ~*
Kimathi Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats for your WIN, with this lovely piece!!! ;-)
Singh Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 12:09 AM
Simply beautiful! Congrats!!
Hamilton Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 7:40 PM
Beautifully written Nette, congrats on another fine win!
Salehi Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 2:51 AM
Yesterday ended last night. Wake up and take your numb love with you before it dies. Give light, and the darkness will disappear by itself.... ...Magnificent write..
Vinson Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 9:50 PM
Hypnotic, Nette. : )
Roper Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Very nice, Nette, love the imagery hugs
Marie Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 12:38 AM
Beauty and sadness entwined together with love and nature it's only witness. Exquisite writing Nette :-) a pleasure to read. blessings, lynn
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 7:51 PM
A great poem, Nette. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
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