Dying For Halloween

As rats were scratching at my face
and snakes were writhing at my feet,
I heard the crackling flames: I'd die
while gagged and tied here to this seat.

The cackling witch, her chanting vile,
then thrust a knife into my eyes,
and said she must remove my gag
to listen to my pleading cries.

But then a hissing cobra struck -
I felt its fangs, then poison flood
throughout my veins. Although at least
it had deprived her of my blood...

written 12th October for Tania's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 11/3/2022 8:40:00 AM
Wow, this is really a Halloween write, but rather you spied all this done to your neighbor, not to you my good friend - an excellent creative write - congrats on your win Jack. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 10/31/2022 7:08:00 AM
LOL Funny and scary - revenge? Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 10/31/2022 3:32:00 AM
Hah… that showed her! Er… I think. Smashing write for a worthy win, Jack. Congrats. Terry
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Date: 10/31/2022 2:08:00 AM
Chilling! Congratulations.
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Date: 10/30/2022 4:32:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky poem!
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Date: 10/18/2022 11:50:00 AM
Spooky! She was one mean witch! Good luck in contest!
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Date: 10/13/2022 10:17:00 AM
cool ending on your Halloween poem, Jack . I gotta go check this one out
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Date: 10/12/2022 11:04:00 AM
Definitely a Halloween poem to die for, Jack! Striking imagery, rhyme and good use of enjambment are worthy of mention. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/12/2022 11:02:00 AM
Chilling and very scary Jack! Well done horror! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings for a less horrific All Hallows Eve!
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Date: 10/12/2022 9:41:00 AM
A chill Halloween write, best wishes
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Date: 10/12/2022 7:01:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Very frightening on the way to Halloween. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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