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Dwindling Faith

Steeply, a mingling of the breaths occurring,
With ashes of raw pearls that were burned,
Preciseness is masked by contrasts of shading,
Pallid and toxic myths reap the rot observed. 

With ashes of raw pearls that were burned,
After the ecstasy spell, the disillusion dwindling,
Pallid and toxic myths reap the rot observed, 
Is it true that we are completely cognizing?

After an ecstasy spell, the disillusion dwindling,
Nirvana signs the deal for the crux forum,
Is it true that we are completely cognizing?
Being a slice of the universe's delve is awesome.

Nirvana signs the deal for the crux forum,
Preciseness is masked by contrasts of shading,
Being a slice of the universe's delve is awesome,
Steeply, a mingling of the breaths occurring.

Written: May 15, 2022

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Bill Baker May 16, 2022 at 5:12 PM Steeply, a mingling of the breaths occurring. My favorite line from this one, Lasaad. Very thought provoking, Bill

Michelle Faulkner May 16, 2022 at 4:01 PM This feels a bit like regret after a reckless rendezvous, but still worth it, love the imagery of 'contrasts of shading'-

Caren Krutsinger May 16, 2022 at 12:53 AM "Is it true that we are completely cognizing? Being a slice of the universe's delve is awesome." - I love these end rhymes!