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A group of odd birds took off from me as of late. Hovering over my sleek head, gazing persistently. I was feeling depressed and desolate. Same as a purple bit afar away on a swingletree. I swore angrily they wouldn't turn dark. Farmers no longer dread local herds.  From then on, I returned to lark. I'm excited to watch the vile birds. Soaring and tweeting over the azure sky. Simultaneously, I hung tight for his reply. The birds were mysteriously gone absent. I notified them, which made me upset. In no instance to return, I swore I would. I've never depended on an endless word.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/3/2021 5:35:00 AM
I cannot write a sonnet however hard I try. Perhaps one day I will master the form. Well done Lasaad...Delice
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Date: 10/2/2021 1:54:00 AM
It's been ages since I wrote a sonnet. This one is deep.
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Date: 10/2/2021 5:39:00 AM
Thanks for your insightful comment, Victor.

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