Dwindled Assets

This man never found the bed out of bounds, 
his wife liked he explored ivory mounds.
Her dwindled assets age got,
he disliked, monk he was not,
ventured out in search of youthful new grounds.

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May 3, 2023
Syllable count : 10/10/7/7/10
Contest : A Funny Or Bawdy Limerick (HMS) 
Sponsored by : Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Allison Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 7:31 AM
dwindling assets lol, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Fowler Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 6:16 PM
Haha. How naughty. Congratulations on your win Subimal! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 10:18 PM
Thank you, Linda.
Kitchin Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative limerick!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 10:17 PM
Thank you, Tania for the placement.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 6:48 PM
Oh no…dwindling assets…some assets have to find new grounds…but how unfortunate.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 10:46 PM
Thank you, Kim for your visit and for your comment.
Foster Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 10:47 AM
The grass is always greener... yet regret... is a heavy burden to risk for very little return. Well written... Ann
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 10:45 PM
Thank you, Anne for your visit and your thoughtful comment.
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